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VeritasWest

VeritasWest

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2019-02-04 JoinedGlobal
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  • VeritasWest
    VeritasWest3yr
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    Ohhhhh noezz

    Soon, she spotted him standing all alone in the middle of the players like he had a coronavirus and was getting isolated.
    Supremacy Games
    Sci-fi · MidGard
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  • VeritasWest
    VeritasWest3yr
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    Flags gonna Flag

    His elements reminded the system about someone, and that was Azkelwart but he shrugged off the thought and focused on the process. 
    My Space-Time System
    Fantasy · xImpulse
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  • VeritasWest
    VeritasWest3yr
    Commented

    @author had

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    My Space-Time System
    Fantasy · xImpulse
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  • VeritasWest
    VeritasWest3yr
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    scam author is scam author :(

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    My Space-Time System
    Fantasy · xImpulse
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  • VeritasWest
    VeritasWest3yr
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    you are constantly going back and forth on this. It is sickening.

    A student's points had two uses; one was for his/her position at the end of the trimester and the other was used to exchange for items at the exchange store (AN: Let's call the exchange points EP.).
    My Space-Time System
    Fantasy · xImpulse
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  • VeritasWest
    VeritasWest3yr
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    Heeeey lets get the poor shmucks to waste stones on repeating the end and start of the chapters.

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    My Space-Time System
    Fantasy · xImpulse
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  • VeritasWest
    VeritasWest3yr
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    And on this paragraph I abandon this novel forever.

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    Level Up Legacy
    Fantasy · MellowGuy
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  • VeritasWest
    VeritasWest3yr
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    Mary Sue is Mary Sue.

    They then disappeared. The one she used just now was space magic. This was the reason why she could become an S-rank magician. She had two elements, which were lightning and space. Coupled with her magic power, she became an S-rank magician.
    The Magician of Sound
    Sci-fi · Fixten
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  • VeritasWest
    VeritasWest3yr
    Commented

    The story is amusing if really simplistic, but the pacing is off. Fewer longer chapters would be better. Plus the timeskip wasn't well handled. But there is a ton of potential waiting to be excavated.

    Ch 32 Nice Young Man
    Affinity:Chaos
    Fantasy · Springs_Halo
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  • VeritasWest
    VeritasWest3yr
    Commented

    James, James Potter

    "Irvine, Irvine Lang."
    Martial Arts Battle Arena
    Sci-fi · SuperHippo
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  • VeritasWest
    VeritasWest3yr
    Commented

    It's things like this that makes this an awesome read

    He was the one...Neo.
    Emperor of Poker
    Sports · SamsaraWithWords
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