IBM5100

mhmmmm

rip Hu Tao washboard

this game me headache

ok I'm confused? what do you mean by "doesn't sound impressive" lol? There is nothing to be impressed about. It's a disgusting sickness that claimed lives of many people. I believe from want i remember that Yomite's either father or mother (Can't remember now but I think mother) died from it, so it was nice to see it appear again as a plot point for Yomite to overcome. Since the disease basically took his mother from him before he could see her ever again. I feel like the arc was very well done both with relationship development of Hu Tao and then Yomite triumphing over the disease. But that's just my take

she is still from Gunnhildr clan...only her family name is different..

Venti is an actual Archon which is presumably a higher form of god, a d he can get drunk...it isn't that strange for Yomite to get sick or infected, as we've never heard of any immunity or resistance from his part...there are many things that are weird in this world. If anything this isn't author's plot hole but genshin impact's overall...

if you read the Sm** chapter you would know that it was stated he owns her and she owns him

It's interesting concept not seen that often before. A lot of made up characters in the old era of Uchiha and Senju. The grammar is pretty good and the story flows well so far.

Good luck man, your majikoi fanfic was a bomb 8-8723-&78-328+_-7_'3'8+-23&8'328+&+'42+8+'&+28$&8+$_++'$8+_'#$8+&'$#8++"$+#8&'+8$#'&+$#&+-2$_+$2+_+$2+8&'$28-'_+8_2'"_+82_'&+8$'_'_#8+*

There is not a single bad Heroine in this game, you better make this a grand huge ultra mega harem, boy. But anyway, Sephiroth looking mc? He is from Russia? I am digging it.