I have confirmation that this prose-like language gets better after Padre, but please, retranslate this section after the novel is done.

Yea it’s the translator, cktalon, who seems to have just discovered a thesaurus.

He’s done it again. Read the other reviews cuz they explain it well. This review is for the translator. My guy, the words you are using might be big, but they ain’t grammatically correct most of the time. I’m not sure which level of education you finished at, but that doesn’t mean the story needs to be forced into your ‘pristine’ language. Yes I can understand ‘…inquired with a calm resolve…’ but would it not be easier for everyone if you just wrote ‘… asked calmly…’? Less for you to write, easier for us to understand. Like, even famous novels from older authors don’t do this. To Kill a Mockingbird is simple to read, same with The Great Gatsby or The Stormlight Archive. So why do you feel the need to make it more difficult for us readers to read? And is this not harder on yourself? Might as well just go read Shakespeare at this point.

Gimme more pls. I need I need I need i need

Chinese dragon?

Finally, a starting comment from the system that doesnt roast the MC

Transmigrator*

They say phoenixes are as rare as chickens

Receptionist????

Exactly what i was thinking

‘Unfortunately’ the author says

is*

Assuming his sx appeal was high in the first place, which it probably wasnt

This is the best novel i have read, ever. Its very clear the author has done a ton of research for this novel. I cannot say how much this story has moved me. Waiting for LotM 2. ✊

So, uhh, is it just me or does praying for a holy power buff on his musket remind you of Youjo Senki, ‘Saga of Tanya the Evil.’ No, srsly, its the exact same concept.

Tbh, this racist sh*t about most Chinese being racist gets on my nerves. Here im sitting, born and raised in a white country as a Chinese person, and seeing other people discriminating against most Chinese due to the news that the *goverment* is discriminating against the African population and that most Chinese novels contain high levels of nationalism is annoying af. Like, who says you can just go ahead and say bullsh*t about a whole race based on their government alone and the literatue the minority of the country write. And what of those of us, who know of others who, and have nothing to do with the crap in China. Can you say that we’re racist and nationalists as well? From what i know from my relatives, it’s mainly the educational system in China that causes this, very much so clearly not what the majority of Chinese have picked

Bruh

Monke

Brooo i love reading comments, just as good as webnovels

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