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It's a pretty good fic all things considered. The quality is superb and progression is good. There a few elements which make it jarring to read but you can just chalk it up to "Yeah he was a Monster Hunter, fair enough". One of the better fics I have read in a while. Keep up the work Author. PS: Also if you do not mind Author, will do a shameless pitch of my own work here.
Customary first review by the Shameless author. This is my first attempt at writing a story, so please be gentle. I will try to be as faithful to the original characters as possible, but please show some leniency to me. Also some questions about the story: 1. Will there be romance? I dunno, I would try to add it and make it as natural as possible but with my experience of nil, it will be a bit difficult. 2. Harem? No. Nothing against them, but I feel it is very difficult to write one and not seem like a Xianxia. 3. OP Protagonist? I mean he will eventually, but not right now. Have you seen how useless D&D characters are up until level 5 or 6? He will struggle with doors. 4. Will the D&D magic and HP magic be the same? Oh you will get to know. But both will stay distinct and separate. 5. Since D&D has levels, will this be a game fic? Unfortunately no. There will be no system. But this is indeed a Progression Fantasy.
Muramasa better be careful. As soon as Naruto realises that Muramasa is able to separate out spirits, the sooner he will be captured and given to Mayuri for testing. separate out Kurama and have him absorb all the Biju to become the Juubi.
GLORIOUS EVOLUTION
he is called mitsuki.
Boruto. I think the first person to ever canonically master Snake Sage Mode on the show(who we witnessed).
What in the Naruto!?! Killed him, forgot him, grew apart and all he needed to forgive her was to know she is spidergirl. I mean understanding that they are different people and they grew apart is fine. But how tf can you forgive your killer tf in like 5-6 chapters. This is some next level Naruto bs.