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The concept is there. the writing is absolutely Trash. the chapters are short. The MC is a brain dead wimp who complains about his old world and reincarnation every 5 seconds. has a God tier system but doesn't know how to optimize his time. He's so scared about losing Minato and Kushina but only trains a few hours a day. gets a Copy fruit from the system but doesn't ask Minato to teach him any jutsu. gets a golden eye ability but doesn't use it for anything useful. MC acts like a toddler going on dates and relaxing and self reflecting without actually doing anything and everything he can do to change the outcome. he knows Minato and Kushina will die and just is like "oh well" I'll just raise Naruto myself. The author should be ashamed putting this book out. it honestly wouldnt surprise me if this is AI slop. because after 293 chapters its been less than 2 weeks in the actual story. and Naruto hasn't even been born. disgraceful.

I was subscribed to your patreon but now it says that page has been removed. what happened?

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

another great song

Author knows good music.

I will trust author this time.

Where is the glow up at from chapter 11? MC is still utterly trash and beta. it's getting harder to read honestly. he is just so pathetically weak it's gross.

Oh this is going to go badly.