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morals in a war? c'mon! the lady killed lots of people at SGA, is a origin bloodliner and is being motivated by REVENGE! Even if she was the ruler of a country war is part of the business. The maganda chief isnt waging war cause of petty reasons. People dies in a war, "as rotten as politicians" is not a good phrase to her choice
what is the difference? (between beetles, Mantis n roaches)
yes, cant discuss with that, besides we can actually say that only Julian is an "adult with vision" the others are really overpowered teenagers that dont think really into the future or are ruthless in their decision. I am really looking forward to how they will develop. Thx for the answers man, been a pleasure
Reading what came next It does make sense some parts, but others have great chance to be kinda of awkard. Following history in some moment Emery os going to face the romans so he will regret not helping Thrax, and the same could be said about Klea. Of course I believe in your potential to do something nice. I really like this part of fitting historical things. My critics are more about loopholes or wasted opportunities you know. Anyway, you do a great job. Just sleep on the idea of developing more these kind of feelings the birth of a nation, the will tô change an Empire, to fight against slavery are universal
"accomplish their purpose" = be F immortals
It's a great story far more logical than most of those VR-AI-Game like world. Like people throwing up for to much blood or carnage. This for itself is really nice, cause c'mon who enters a new body and starts fighting like a madman from day 1??? Although our protagonist is faaar more quicly than the rest is ok. I read about 200 ch. And the novel is preeeetty slow paced, which is nice, again, it makes much more sense.The thing that actually bothers me is that he is much more logical in game than IRL. In game he isnt the most cunning, but he doubts, he is quickly in catching strange things, not the most intelligente, but not dumb. IRL he acts like a child, gee, for someone that lives alone and is at the university is a miracle he isnt cheated at every negotiation you make. For real, like (not a spoiler), who would chat with a guy from the most powerfoul company in the o world without a lawyer? And who would trust such a guy? Cmon, thats stuff that kids do. Another thing, the special case that he is IRL isnt as well developed as the game thing. So the novel can have to notes: In game:8/9 IRL:6
This part is being horribly conducted. From the stand point of everyone except Julian Rome should be restrained. Kleo knows what romans do and didnt like it. Emery already heard that they were close to his land. WHY WOULD THEY SUPPORT THAT??? Also Thrax was being made to fight for entertainment and Julian is fighting for a cause which he knows is corrupted??? This all started with Julian seeing that Rome wasnt all that and wishing to change it. Besides all is being led to Julian winning and even if he doesnt how Thrax didnt make a change during the last battle for gods sakes Emery and Kleo punched a bunch of special knights without dropping a sweat and Thrax cant even destroy an army? Isnt that the thing he is good at? Author tripping just like with maeve, I understand that the story needs to go down one rode, but man... do it more nicely. Emery and Kleo dropping that vote was awful
Hope that you aren't with any kind of damage take it easy with the recovery
C'mon almost 800 chapters free about an Ant. That for itself speaks about the quality Is an amazing story about a world like you've never (or almost) seen before. The only downgrade is that involves systems but is quite different the way it exists. Lots of mysteries and a very amazing and creative way of telling stories about the present, past and future. Enough with the OP MC. Enough with harems. Enough with missions. Enough with the MC being the prince charmy. Give a chance to the colony and this amazing world