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Diznattsu4mthCommentedCh 3 Chapter 3 - Free real estate- Diznattsu10mthPosted
This has the potential to be a Great novel, However as I've read and read through the chapters, I can't seem to help but notice in every paragraph there's an exclamation point (!). Now that may be intended but I find it quite annoying to read pass through, I hope the author would lessen the exclamation points (!) for a better coherent quality since it nessesary doesn't have to be on every paragraph. Overall, I quite like the Story Building and the World Background of this novel, the characters are unique and I'm a sucker for anti-hero protagonists.Definitely a 10/10!
- Diznattsu1yrCommented
hmm 10 thousand years?
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NOOOOO MOTHER
"Nooooo mother" he screamed and then everything turned dark as his consciousness faded away. - Diznattsu2yrCommented
plz use question marks
With a smirk, I turned around, "Shall we begin this slaughter...my dear Yura." I asked, enjoying the breath of fresh air that hung in the air. - Diznattsu2yrCommentedCh 23 Forest of Serein
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kinda gay
"Ahhhh ~ ~ ~ ~ Damn it, damn it, damn it!" - Diznattsu2yrCommented
she*
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HOL UP-
"AHM!~ B-Brother, my husband... Will come back soon, we have to finish quickly, inside, do it inside~!" - Diznattsu2yrCommented
bruh what? Please don't tell me what I think this is with all the SAO joke references.
"My dad said that he and my mom played the first VR game." - Diznattsu2yrCommentedCh 1 Chapter 1: A World of Mana
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*in close range
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