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Lord_Leylin

Lord_Leylin

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2019-01-07 JoinedIndia
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  • Lord_Leylin
    Lord_Leylin4 years ago
    Commented

    And who are you, the proud Lord said

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  • Lord_Leylin
    Lord_Leylin4 years ago
    Replied to Silver_Chains

    He's the family head

  • Lord_Leylin
    Lord_Leylin4 years ago
    Commented

    Huh, mathematically correct use of parentheses.

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  • Lord_Leylin
    Lord_Leylin4 years ago
    Posted

    I only needed to read the word warlock and I was on board. The story seems interesting but some more detail could be put on Issie's character. It may be because he seems weak but he seems quite ooc for me. But maybe it's just the fact that this leylin has not experienced the magus world. Hope to see some great keikaku from Leylin and all the best.

  • Lord_Leylin
    Lord_Leylin5 years ago
    Commented

    How about a celestial/star dragon fruit itself, can have powers of stars and what not along with reflecting his background. This would allow fast travel through air and you can probably do some black hole shenanigans after awakening, along with gravity though the constraint would be he will only be able to attract thing to himself or on set point he could place like a singularity from Mass Effect.

  • Lord_Leylin
    Lord_Leylin5 years ago
    Replied to Eltoxico69

    Quite a similar start however things will change very soon.

  • Lord_Leylin
    Lord_Leylin5 years ago
    Replied to Eltoxico69

    Sorry about that I just type the chapter at once so I sometime type Lelouch instead of Leylin.

  • Lord_Leylin
    Lord_Leylin5 years ago
    Replied to XlouS

    There is one instance that has stuck with me in the book. He stated how everything he does he has a purpose. When he spends time with his family he knows how happy he would be and if he spent researching he knows that too. That way he does what he feels would bring him the most returns.

  • Lord_Leylin
    Lord_Leylin5 years ago
    Replied to XlouS

    Much smarter, he starts as a mediocre person but rises all thanks to his mind and ai chip. I would say is the archetypical cold detached antagonist who cares only about his goals and what would help him achieve it.

  • Lord_Leylin
    Lord_Leylin5 years ago
    Replied to RoyalToilet

    I will try to, I want to explore Leylin himself as a character. My name is reason enough. So if I write after this Leylin will probably still be an mc but probably in a different world