hello?!

does it matter what you say? I enjoyed the book either way, even though I have read both they both have major differences. even if they have small similarities that means nothing special for me. as long as its a good read. I am good to read it!

I would say something great but thats not needed, this writer has written a book to truly learn from even with the small grammar issues and some small work breakages. one can truly admire the world built upon these words. The overall story is great 👍 .

say what you want but my review is an honest one and I will not change it because you are being toxic. I will only change it when I reread the book and find the work even better than before because he knew what to go back and fix! Those who truly support the book should support it in an honest way! Otherwise It just makes the author you support look terrible! By putting berating quibble on an honest review. As for the Resources you have available... It seems you lack use of them! If you click my name you can see, I am an author also. I have written a title of my own. I would be utterly honored for this author to come to my book and honestly give his/her review! Good or bad! That is the point of the review box! Not for fans to berate other honest reviews off the page so the book looks like nothing But a five star. That helps the author none when they have errors that need attention, It is better to aim for their true thoughts! That helps as much as a five star, They may see a better idea when going back for a simple addition!

I rather enjoy the premise of the story from the synopsis and the first chapter but when reading i get lost... the grammar is correct punctuation correct. but it is evident that you are missing key words like adjitives and nouns inside your explanations. otherwise once you are used to mentally filling in those words it gets easier. Good book👍