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KushalManna9dReplied to RumotameruI believe he would be a lot more heavy handed if it was Jenna, considering she was the one who told him the "bloody rivers" phrase.
Nevertheless, Martha couldn't help but feel sad. That childish, idiot kid had turned into a cold-faced mass murderer. She understood Khan's response had been somewhat justified and knew him deeply enough to accept that his actions weren't only for himself. Yet, that emotion didn't come from her rational side.- KushalManna1mthCommentedCh 756 Stranded
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- KushalManna4mthCommentedCh 252 Another Possibility
- KushalManna8mthReplied to Saphartlantis
no, his bloodline is not sealed aa mentioned earlier
"Those behind these Ordeals are truly twisted," Jake quipped, realizing that both his Space Storage and his Inner Space Dimension were now out of reach—unless he exerted a monumental effort. - KushalManna10mthReplied to Dylan_Hopkins_0665
can't you not talk about fictional character's intelligence when looking at it from a reader's vantage point?
'Blood! They need my blood,' he thought. 'That's why they keep asking for my blood. Is it to learn about my techniques? No, it's to learn about me.' - KushalManna11mthPosted
Great story with great plot, but there are just some problems that I would like to point out. First of all, there was no reasonable explanation regarding why he got such a monster class without touching the 'stone' or whatever it was called that provides classes (I forgot what it was called).Secondly, his hatred or lack of trust towards some people is just overblown and unreasonable (in my opinion) such as Anya, the mirror reality group. I don't think it was their fault, and given MC's otherwise rationale mind he should have understood that.Lastly, (this is just a suggestion for the author considering future progression) the MC should not just focus on mana, as there can be people with spatial abilities who can just ignore the skeletons and attack him from behind. As such, a full skeletal Armor would be a good power to have, or maybe he hones his close- range fighting.That's all,
- KushalManna1yrReplied to Dogue
- KushalManna1yrReplied to TeDureShit1_2Ch 533 Volcano
- KushalManna1yrReplied to Eveofchaos
the best space fight scenes that I have seen and a really good story as well. A shame they didn't continue it after the six seasons... so many questions left unanswered.
Author's notes: To clarify the previous chapter, you feel any form of acceleration in space but not constant speed. I worded a few things differently to make it clearer, and I'll make sure to explain it more in-depth in the future. - KushalManna1yrCommented
maybe his mana has some kind of interference properties, or simply blocks the natural flow or other mana
A few strange but minor events happened. The screen under Wayne flickered twice for no apparent reason and resumed working properly almost immediately. That alone didn't mean much, but Khan made sure to add it to his mental map of clues. - KushalManna1yrCommentedCh 422 Tests
- KushalManna1yrReplied to Baradha
come here, I wanna punch you in the stomach
"Guys, let's go. This party is boring." Cedric was still carrying Adrianna and his injuries from the fight earlier were beginning to hurt. - KushalManna1yrReplied to MoltenmarkCh 402 Manners