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The story started well, quite interesting and intriguing. it developed quite promising. Yet, the end was too abrupt. You could have written more, dear author. I wish your next book is better than this one. Keep on improving and being creative! 🙏🏻🙂

Although there are mistakes in pronouns and words, the story is still captivating. I couldn't stop reading it once I started. The endings covered all side characters well. Thank you for your hard work, author 😘 I wish there were side stories about the children, though. I hope the author may consider the side stories 🙏🏻

I really enjoy this story. Even though there are mistakes in the translation, they are minors and don't affect the overall story. I'm really looking forward to the continuation of this story. Thank you for your hard work 👍🏻🙏🏻🙂

The storyline is quite nice, but, the characters could be better. The story is quite captivating and the ending is not bad. Thank you, author 👍🏻

I have quite mixed feelings about the main characters and actually stopped reading for a while as I got a bit exasperated by them. Surprisingly, this story ends beautifully and satisfyingly. No regrets here. What a satisfying and captivating story. Well done, author! Keep on writing better stories! ☺

I like the beginning so far. I hope the storyline is interesting 🙂

Seriously?! What kind of ending is this?! Please, provide side stories... It's too cruel just to end this great story like this! Please dearest author 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻😭😭😭

The story is captivating, quite intriguing. It's a pity that not many questions are answered at the end of the story. It shouldn't be ended just as it is.

I love the fact that the story is captivatingly humorous. I couldn't stop myself from reading each chapter and I was quite surprised when I found that I had reached the last chapter. Can't wait to read the continuation of this story. Please don't be too long... 🙏🏻