John Wick is that you? Lol seriously that is one fun fight scene. Coz when it started, all I can imagine is the Boogeyman.😂 I'm a bit bugged by the repeated use of Cyanide tho. It's getting cringed. An alias is only cool when it is used less. His name is Jace right? I can't relate to the mc coz when I picture myself in his position it is disturbing. Calling myself Cyanide is a no go. Bet you will use over a thousand Cyanide til the end of this novel. 😂

Exaggerated.thousands of times advance compare to the present technology? If that's true why would they still use solar panels and common things like a locked drawer which can be lockpicked but the mc gave up on it. Author I'll tell you this, if our tech is advanced even by 100 years you would be seeing flying cars and lots of a.i robots. Don't exaggerate too much coz it'll ruin the mood.

Unrealistic to say the least. A genius of what he is again? Coz so far I don't see him act like one. He knew there'd be traitors yet still act like reckless abandon. No character improvement so far. Mediocre and cringe fight scenes and I'm embarrassed with his 'stop your paws you barbarians' while he is talking about a monster. Ughh I'll still read it hoping for a character development.

So far it's ok 🤔 the only problem is the MC's attitude. He says he's a genius but act like a moron. Maybe it was on purpose for the mc to have a character growth. But right now his antics is one of the most annoying part so far. I expect him to show his genius side as he claimed to be one not his ugly side this early.

I've been meaning to ask this... Merlin is a famous wizard so why did he play melee while using this name? His name is Arthur and yet he wants to be merlin but obviously his play style is melee. What if there's some who used his Arthur name? Wouldn't that be awkward?

I don't understand it. Is he a transmigrator? Or is he a VRMMORPG player? Coz if he's a transmigrator that'll explain the introduction why he's perspiring and feeling disoriented but if he's a player who started a game that'll be weird. The story started blurry I guess the cause is his name. Lol I'm getting Mage is too Op vibes.

This mc is too generous and the characters are very passive. They just accept whatever the mc is giving them without any questions or even little bit of doubt. If this isn't a TGD fan fic I'd say he is running for presidency with left and right giving out top grade cultivation manual like some common cabbages.

Hmm so all that male bravado has been thrown out of the bin and what's left is a beta male who's trying to be a comedian. Hancock's personality in here is different from the original. Oh well can't really complain coz it's a ff.

He forgot. He even forget how dumb he was.always copying luffy's too much effort .you can see he's luffy's bitch in the way he's acting and developing his power. He wanted to create harem while also wanting to be buttfvcked by luffy.

Is this mayer a character of significance? Coz seriously this man changes his name 3 times in this previous chapters. He was laftso then loftso then loftor. You couldve named him fatso instead. I get the feeling that he's the mc here. Then why tf the mc got a problem with using his name vlad instead of the child's? He thought he'd be an alien??? There's a dracule mihawk, von curei , ivankov and so many names that are alike to his name. Author, seriously u can make fan fiction but atleast do a sensible one. The logic in this ff is non existent. Fyi vlad dracula doesn't swear like that. The way he curses seems so modern.

I will stop at this chapter coz the mc's a retard fck. Acting like a retard coz he's bored that's simply idiotic. In the first place why would he be bored knowing he got reincarnated to one piece and in the persona of ace with that. I don't see the point with his comedic act.its cringeness is unbearable. Tch.

Its obvious coz china is the perpetrator of the current pandemic. They are pigs eating human eating fetuses eating exotic animals eating shit. If ever the zombie apocalypse ever occur caused by this pandemic... I'd hunt chinese.

Atleast I'd get the intelligence stat.you on the other hand wont be getting any intelligence stat. You would be getting 'Abnormal status' stat for sure. Retardation and autism belongs to that stat.Lol

And for the record you chinese always describe themselves as the gods of the universe looking down to all people. What an insecure race. If a chinese treat you bad do you treat him with respect and revere him? Are you an idiot? Its not just me there are millions of people who hates china. Thats the reality.

You must be a chinese. I wasnt a racist before covid-19 struck and obviously instead of owning to you chinese pigs' mistake, you chineses chose to blame others and as if not contented enough go into different countries to spread it. If the end of the world ever come id erase you pigs in the world.

Hahaha chinese bullshittery at its finest!!! The revenge part is so retarded. This is the perfect example of creating a loose end. Fcking chinese author.

Its chinese chingchang bullshit at its finest. What can you expect when a chinese do a fan fiction? A fantasy will turn into xianxia with all the cultivation bullshit. They are good at cultivation thise chinese pigs just like how they cultivated Covid 19.

Its made in china.

A chapter is wasted in cringe worth insult and the mc want to reason with enel what a fcktard. Just 1 kick and the chapter ends. I remember watching slum dunk reading this chapter if u get what i mean. Lol

Wahahaha exactly my thoughts! The continued strengthening of the mc and in the next moment he'll be fighting beerus. Lol this author is funny. 15 chapters in and we'll witness enel vs mc fight. But then the mc fought mc in his mind. Lol then move on again. This mc is just fighting inside his tiny little mind.