Kitsunoe

first shiny for me was a ho-oh on pokemon gold. Kid me thought all ho-oh had that special shiny effect.

Yes except the Eevee is the Rayquaza and the Rhydon is a Caterpie.

I read this wall of text and found it informing and if it is true, then it is very impressive. also congratulations for not making a single spelling mistake nor a grammar mistake. that is if you wrote this out yourself or you could have copy pasted it or you used ai. none the less, i enjoyed reading it. thank you.

this is definitely written with the help of AI. i know because unless you specifically tell most AIs to use long detailed paragraphs and not use short one line sentences, it will use short broken line sentences. it honestly gets frustrating to read. and it is a way to tell the author doesn't truly care about the story for if they did they would correct the AI or just write the story themselves.

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almost anywhere is better than warhammer 40k

This story looks good at start. I look forward to seeing it grow.