Zarden

….His transformed clones

He is the devil known for his control over demonic power. You could say he is the “Control Devil”! :)

That was not what I was expecting! Good work author, ya got me!

That was so unexpected, yet made me laugh harder than it should!!!! Lol 🤣

Honesty, I also thought you made him too strong with the system but your content kept it interesting to read. I‘m glad your taking another shot at Young Justice and will defiantly check it out. Thanks for what you wrote here.

Hestia

I think she was saying “bones”.

I like the concept you started with. If you lost your motivation perhaps trying a rewrite while using this as your test? You can give yourself a framework of the direction you want to take.

Don’t force yourself if you are too exhausted. We all enjoy your story but that doesn’t mean we want you to sacrifice your health for this. If you need, take a few days or even a week off to recover.