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ManagerS

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I simple love novel. Action, Romance, and Fanfictions

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  • ManagerS
    ManagerS1yr
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    The reason people hate it is because it completely unnecessary. Let say the mc is kind and want the protagonist to progress. Going that route, often time have the reader wondering who the mc. The guy chilling in the background, watching all the time or the dude training, improving himself and facing the villains. It simple diminish the writer Mc to a side character level. Some writer do it and it end out find. Others totally mess up the story focus.

    'I've read people disliking characters helping the protagonist but I can see myself in him.'
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    Epic of Apophis
    Anime & Comics · Try_hard
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    ManagerS1yr
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    Now just imagine. They can share quirk...... All for One: ...... All Might: ...... All eight users of OFA: .....

    "Oh, God, finally...!" moaned Toru, strengthening her hold on Izuku's body. It hurt way more than she anticipated, but she didn't care. All she knew was that she and Izuku had finally become one, so she grabbed his head and started kissing him fervently, nearly knocking him over as a result of him being in a daze. After all, the moment he stuck his dick in Toru, a faint blue notification window had appeared in front of his face, stating, 'Bond Threshold has been reached. Would you like to add Toru Hagakure to your Party?'
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    BNHA: Singularity
    Anime & Comics · Einlion
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    ManagerS1yr
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    It being good in rescue mission doesn't mean she is meant to be an hero or even work in an hero agency. She can work in the government and participate in things like that. If she can't protect herself, she is useless. A liability that no sensible person want. Some may argue that she could learn martial art for self defense but compare to some villain, she might as well be quirkless. At the end of the day, she a slightly better train human light bulb. His father seem to focus a lot more of battle than rescue.

    "I can understand why you are upset, my dad made a rash call with her and many others. If it doesn't add to the Agency's strength, he doesn't want them. It sounds like she would be instrumental during evacuations and guiding rescue teams to aid people.", I remarked.
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    Jumping Through the Omniverse as a Conduit
    Anime & Comics · ManOfCultureLeon
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    ManagerS1yr
    Replied to Liiana

    Dumbledore is more incompetent than evil. A competent Dumbledore would have probably control Hogwarts better. There probably wouldn't have been two dark lord if the man did things differently. Im not sure about Grindelward, but Voldemort could have been avoided.

    Severus however had different thoughts, the old man was manipulative but he was a good one too. His actions were mostly for the wizarding world, afterall if there was the choice between a single person and the whole wizarding world as well as muggle world? What could he do?, The only method by which a Hocrux could be destroyed was by destroying the container. It would have been not an easy decision to bear the guilt of sacrificing a boy to his death for the good of the Wizarding World. But was he right? Absolutely yes.
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    Transmigrated into Severus Snape with Golden Trio back in Time
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    ManagerS1yr
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    I will apologized first since it may be me just ranting cause the mc is annoying me. Sorry, and feel free to just ignore it. Okay, Im getting a bit irratated on some part of this novel. The entire premise is good and interesting but the character and chapter is getting on my nerve. At this moment, when it come to severus trauma, it seem that the logical side, Vader is failing pitifully to lower it. It between a complete irrational dark side rage or a full blown restraint. Maybe i wrong, but the minute black and potter attack, the mc should be decisive enough to knock them out. If he can't control himself, he should have train in that than what he been doing in the previous chapters. Doesnt Occulumency help? The Lily situation is annoying to me personally and i wish the MC would just move on. Around her, he being restraint or too mindful of her. It feel like he is going to overlap padma and lily together and stop him from doing something logical. He is not Dark Vader but he is not a goodie two shoe. The relationship between the two woild just be toxic. Now for the chapters. I know each chapter can't have important stuff in it for story progression, but something can be finished in two or three lines. I feel like the pass four chapter before the duel could have been put into one. I apologized, i feel like I'm ranting and it probably best to ignore it, but im just saying what i feel. The book is good with just a few annoying points to me.

    Ch 40 Chapter 39: Not Severus lucky day
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    Amalgam Darth Vader/Snape (Wednesday/The Addams Family, HP, Star Wars)
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    ManagerS1yr
    Replied to Deisy_Marin

    Rather than have her crush, it would have been better if he just didnt bother with her. Severus already apologize and she didnt accept it. The new Severus should as he already said before, call it a day and ignore her. Make the both of them go on with their life. It might be less toxic that way.

    Ch 35 Chapter 34: Cute Slytherin Boy
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    Amalgam Darth Vader/Snape (Wednesday/The Addams Family, HP, Star Wars)
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  • ManagerS
    ManagerS1yr
    Commented

    I honestly hope he doesn't compromise too much just because the suppose protector of earth are so easily manipulated.

    Ch 146 I Will Come In Peace.
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    Aden Strong: Avatar In DC
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    ManagerS1yr
    Commented

    +1

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    ManagerS1yr
    Commented

    I hope he would have said' Oh, well that your problem.'

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    ManagerS1yr
    Commented

    Nope, you are simply useless here

    'Fuck shield, this is the perfect job!'
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    Marvel: Her Stigma
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  • ManagerS
    ManagerS1yr
    Commented

    Thank for the chapter

    Ch 121 Chapter 117: The İdea Of Allience Was Completly Shattered
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    Speedster in Multi-verse
    Anime & Comics · EZRED
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    ManagerS1yr
    Replied to God_Doom

    Not to mention Raven and Zatanna have a lot of potential. Maybe not the physically strongest but they have magic and magic could do alot if properly used.

    Ch 105 First Firebending Sub-skill Part 1.
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    Aden Strong: Avatar In DC
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    ManagerS1yr
    Commented

    Is it me alone feel like we just enter the dark multiverse

    "Your mine" a whisper could be heard before all light was gone leaving the room in darkness.
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    The Undefeatable (Male Reader x DC/Marvel Harem
    Anime & Comics · SirZurone
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    ManagerS1yr
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    It because of these ideals anyone with a stronger will than Batman and Superman end up becoming a villain in their eyes .

    "He has shown great power but for some reason we have not heard of him and for him to suddenly appear when we needed help most is rather suspicious, where was he before and why didn't he help us before this."
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    The Undefeatable (Male Reader x DC/Marvel Harem
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    ManagerS1yr
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    Shuri

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    Blind Dreamer Of Madness
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    ManagerS1yr
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    Poor Gods. They know not of what they brought upon themselves .

    Ian murmured to himself in a bit of anticipation as he approached the Gods, speaking a few last words, "Death fighting style, let's start."
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    DC: Rose Of Death
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  • ManagerS
    ManagerS1yr
    Commented

    +1

    (Alice)
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    Werelion In Twilight
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    ManagerS1yr
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    Is it really betrayal if they didn't see her as their own?

    "Komand'r later betrayed her planet with detailed information about Tamaran's defenses to the Citadel. They conquered Tamaran with ease, and the surrender conditions included the enslavement of me. I was also never permitted to return to Tamaran since it would mean the Citadel would devastate the planet for Tamaran's abrogation of the treaty. When I escaped Komand'r took her rage out on our people."
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    GOTO V.0
    Movies · God_Of_Brutality
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    ManagerS1yr
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    I'm more wondering about, how Meliodas suddenly turn into girl but meh.

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    I'm A God In The Seven Deadly Sins
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    ManagerS1yr
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    your making the worst type of yandere. These are the hardest to tame.

    Ivy looked at all of this from the window of her apartment in shock before yelling, "That bitch!!" In her mind, she didn't see the scene of the lovers showing their affection after being apart for a while, all she saw is Selina tainting Ian...
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