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Kelly1111yrPostedIt's a boring read. Author makes a pretty good character but the biggest problem I have is that there wouldn't be a difference if there was no reincarnation. The MC feels and acts like an average or below average intelligent OC. Simple fact of the matter is that it shouldn't take so long to learn some things especially with the adult mind and the brain plasticity(not sure if its the right word) of a child. Obviously his initial situation is a problem but still shouldn't be as big of a problem either the author is making things unnecessarily difficult or the protag just sucks. Then again this is a free fanfic and I usually like this authors work. So maybe there's something I missed or this novel just isn't for me.
- Kelly1111yrReplied to Brutality
If its thought operated it should be able to detect intent
Following the information imprinted in his mind, Izuku closed his eyes and muttered, "Inspect Status..." in a faint, nearly inaudible tone. It turned out that human minds were fairly disorderly, so to prevent his status window from appearing and disappearing randomly, Izuku's system was primarily voice-activated. He could change this in the system's menu but elected to leave it as is for the time being. - Kelly1111yrReplied to kurosive
The vow negates itself. So power boost if people don't know about it and no power boost when they know. I imagine it's a stronger power boost than the one regular sorcerers gain from explaining their powers. Since he loses the boost when 10 people have found out about it.
1) The higher the number of people is deceived by my power and the deeper they are in my deception, the greater the overall improvement to my Cursed Energy (Manipulation, Amount, Reserves, Comprehension, etc.), but it required my original abilities to be completely masked. If one person finds out, it's a -10% decrease to decrease to whatever was improved with the exception of Satoru Gojo and Yuta Okkotsu. - Kelly1111yrReplied to OldDaoistTruly
It took Jariaya 6 months to learn the rasengan compared to narutos one and Jariaya has reserves larger the jonin levels. The most important factor of the rasengan is control not chakra capacity. The clone jutsu is not similar to the shadow clone in terms of mechanics. The clone jutsu is more of a genjutsu than the clone jutsu thats why naruto failed he can't accomplish the kind of chakra control needed for genjutsu. Also have you seen his replacement and transformation jutsu only Sasuke can match him. In terms of brain smart he was a bit of an idiot but any area naruto applied himself he excelled massively that's why he's a savant.
'Don't waste your time,' said a voice, 'remember you're trying to get stronger to survive— to thrive— you can't waste time worrying about others when you know how this world is and what's to come.' - Kelly1111yrReplied to OldDaoistTruly
Also naruto was water walking albeit awfully before the seal was removed on boiling hot water.
'Don't waste your time,' said a voice, 'remember you're trying to get stronger to survive— to thrive— you can't waste time worrying about others when you know how this world is and what's to come.' - Kelly1111yrReplied to
By that logic every jutsu should be easy for naruto because he can "spam it till he gets it right" that's what learning is doing something till you get it right. No that's not what happened he figured out the shadow clone jutsu and got it on his 3rd or 4th try also what do you mean "when you get used to it". Getting used to something is part of the learning process that's like saying differentiation is hard but when you get used to it, it's like factorisation. It's still hard to learn. Notice how you didn't say anything about the rasengan an attack that's basically an advanced form of chakra control.
'Don't waste your time,' said a voice, 'remember you're trying to get stronger to survive— to thrive— you can't waste time worrying about others when you know how this world is and what's to come.' - Kelly1111yrReplied to OldDaoistTruly
Naruto is a genius savant who learnt a kinjutsu in an afternoon learnt how to tree walk in a week although he had 100 times the chakra reserves sasuke did. He also learnt how to water walk even when orichimaru messed with his seal. He learnt the rasengan in a week albeit an incomplete form it was basically at 90% completion. It is accepted fact that he is more talented than sasuke in the fandom making him the most talented ninja of his generation. Don't compare our protagonist or the average ninja to him
'Don't waste your time,' said a voice, 'remember you're trying to get stronger to survive— to thrive— you can't waste time worrying about others when you know how this world is and what's to come.' - Kelly1111yrReplied to Victor_Weismann
Also in some universes the fact that the reincarnate isn't found out is really unrealistic
"I took him as my student like you, he doesn't have your talent but he has an inborn spell that protects the mind from influence of others and different magical energies, so I offered to teach him in return he will be teaching you this Occlumency stuff since I don't need it." Sasuga Ainz-sama bullshitting his way like a pro... wait wrong anime. - Kelly1111yrReplied to Daoistucudpk
Hahahahahahaha Funny comment
[Uchiha Sasuke has been selected] - Kelly1111yrReplied to Donekulda"Son, Albus will take care of you from now on until you are old enough to live on your own. You will leave this house and go stay with him. I have also left everything I have or own in your possession. Albus would explain when you are of age."
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Grammarly is free
"Hello Hinata Chan, When did you sat there?" I enquired. - Kelly1111yrReplied to Dragon_Lord_KuroII
Usually with stuff like this if the ROB isn't immediately benevolent or immediately cruel or somewhere in the middle but instead is beating around the bush talking to you then that can mean there are rules the ROB has to follow. So although risky to talk back it might allow him to get better compensation instead of getting screwed over
"I don't know. Maybe, because you dropped a fucking meteor on my head?! I got killed by a fucking space pebble!! A pebble!! The only thing worse than that is getting killed by frozen piss or dying while loving yourself!! And, it was your fault!" - Kelly1111yrCommented
Interesting you just assumed he's a bad guy because of his eyes, in this fanfic it's probably true but the fact that the mc was complaining about discrimination and bad human nature then proceeds to assume someone is bad because of something that could very well be just a mutation quirk is very hypocritical
His eyes were like a snakes, with small, narrow slits holding the cold and piercing stare that shook Akira to the core. Those were the eyes of no normal man, Akira knew he was in trouble. - Kelly1111yrCommented
There's probably no second floor
He did not know. - Kelly1111yrCommented
Personality death
"You're not going to remember anything except MHA and One piece so why care. - Kelly1111yrCommented
Get well soon 🙏🙏🙏 Also the title scared me I thought you were dropping the story😢
Too ill to write - Kelly1111yrReplied to Azim_Sheaik
Fanfiction!!!?
Ground/Earth (supreme), Dragon/Domination (supreme), - Kelly1111yrCommentedCh 37 Unknown creature
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Imagine they were planning a surprise bachelors party or birthday party. But this is the tragedy back story so it's definitely the obvious.
After receiving that notice, Ryan spent a day in a daze without knowing what to do. His parents were in the early fifties, so he didn't expect to hear that. When he recovered from the shock, he began to prepare the things necessary for their funeral, but things only got worse from there. When he was about to inform his best friend and fiancee about it, Ryan saw them leaving a cheap motel together early in the morning. His mind was still in a daze, and he didn't even manage to ask why they were together at such a place. However, he eventually understood it when he left his car and approached them.