legionnaire

the black dread roars!!! it calls to a hero to save the princess from the dangers of the mountain to come. for without her spirit and body maybe slice to pieces, and her life forfeit... aka rhaenys bouta get murked... well without the mc that is lol.

again great chapter

loving it. keep up the good work. good luck with your interviews

bro is funnier than the mc haha

pretty good my guy, cant wait for more

If you want some cool gravity based moves check out “lashings” from stormlight archive, basic an entire magic system around gravity.

ME: damn new chapter again? he just doesnt stop! Author: sike gotcha b-tch! have a justified rant!. see ya soon shorty!.

not to disparage you, just if you are using ai, it really limits the quality of your story, even if it make up in quantity.

I'm going to ask, are you using an ai to write/edit/translate this story? cause it does seem the case were every second paragraph there a bloody new title for two more paragraphs. and i just keep happening like 15 times per webnovel chapter. also, the way in which its written is like a book form of those super quick tiktok edits, we get like 5 seconds somewhere where the MC instantly achieves his goal, no struggle or thought process... just "me want do good at thing - there me did good at thing". aswell as we dont get to see the characters interact on a topic more than one or two lines each, and BOOM new scene.

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