Shubham_Sinha
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You have choosen death itself my friend
Nope I have been reading novel since 2016 and i genuinely know how story goes up and it one of major plot holes that can never been eliminated nicely one could do anything such as why transmigration any other secret or anything but you need to know if people known there is a alien soul in loved one body there family members will eliminate him at any cost that is human nature as as we human tend to have very protective nature towards the things we have even we like it or not. Also because me having read so many novels have also put me view of your novel others can disagree but i genuinely thought you were going good until u did this it just give a bad taste to me and believe me i never forget the plot holes left by authors so just this gonna bug me whenever he gonna talk with his sister and i generally don't comment in novels but i commented here u need to know I genuinely regretted plot hole in this novel u can say this subjective but u can think various scenario where the things will never go as u planned.... Well keep writing keep up urs good work
it ruined already... Nothing can save this story even the following plots are good
He is stupid for sure
thanks for chapter
thanks for chapter
thanks for chapter
thanks for chapters
Nope NTR are not that much irritating .. once you read a shit tons of novels and have experience of them for 8-10 years u will know the fucking annoying are authors .. .they fucking degrade the initial good novels or good idea .. refuse to admit their work is trash .. . what irks me more that they make the story repeatative as novels they read and refuse to add more elements to it. .. time passes and they initially forgets from which freaking point of view they wrote the novel and goes as same scenarios like face slapping, thinking with dick, getting annoyed at any fucking small reasons and there are many .. .well just my opinion don't take me as a bully or I would have shitted on too many in webnovel. .. also I like the way the novel is going .. .i would like to say a good and solid start
Bye ..enough of this trash
Well generally I never give reviews to novels as i m a very old reader(not in age ). .. it's about 8 years since I m into novels till now I read some to pass my free time ..i have read massive novels above 7000 or 8000 chapters. .also one of the earliest reader of webnovel ( you can check my profile page) . . well why this much of shit because I wanna tell author this novel can easily be said one of the gems it has good potential to be good novel.. so please don't leave it... and to coming fellas who wanna read it .. I can assure u 1st volume is fabulous written
Pay attention here the curse has already been cured
Are u a fucking Chinese author who goes with such bad move or only urs lower body works?? idiot
well **** her Thier is no teacher in your harem
i think it should be a immortal animal