Why can't I use my fast passes on your story. I like to be able to read the rest of the story. It really is good but if I can't use fast passes then maybe you could put it on Amazon. then I can buy the book and download it to my kindle.

that was so funny, I don't think I ever laughed that hard.. (pun intended)

why doesnt the king tell the council that she is not human because humans can't transform themselves into a creature that looks like a human with blue gold scales, deep black scary irises, long nails. sounds like she can shape-shift. Or maybe she could be morphes long lost sister, I mean no one knows her age exactly and she doesn't really remember anyone except this geya woman who cared for her. she had to have parents once long ago. I think morphes needs to chill until they find who or what she is. ok I'm just rambling on with my over thinking. we'll just have to see

thank you for the extra chapters

well thats all for now until the privilege chapters are released. I'll keep checking back. Hopefully soon as this is really captivating story

maybe Chris is the one killing them

I like this book so far. In my head I'm thinking Waverly is his mate.

yay I finally got here.. it was perfect the children got their revenge and were finally able to find peace.. I loved this chapter. so happy you allowed the children their revenge and you did it so beautifully in spite of the blood and carnage.. that sorry excuse for warlock deserved what he got. thank you for using my idea.

awe man, just as they are facing off the chapter ends.. your killing me.. lol

cant wait to see trinity's final fight, I hope it's in the next chapter. reese was awesome, now that fight couldn't have gone down any better.. oh and I hope shawn will be ok

also I think maybe her cousins can help her learn to trust again

I like chay and I hope she can get through to star.. as for the Alpha he has a good heart and good intentions.. but to just blurt out that she was his mate and she was going to be with him was incredibly naive because he knew she didnt trust him and she believed the Alpha hated her because was weak. he should apologize and get to know her and let her wolf decide with her when she finds her wolf again. go slow .. I mean if some just walked up to me and said hey your my girl and we are getting married. he'd mostly likely get slapped and in your dreams dip sh#T.. lol

well I was only going to read the first chapter and ended up reading all 12 so far.... good start.

thank you for the chapter.

last hapter I read was 184 yesterday, cant wait to read the Rescue.. Trinity has become very powerful, can wail till she reaches her full potential. She makes a perfect Goddess, she is a loving person who wants everyone to be happy, she is fair and giving, but still able to give out punishments to those who deserve it according to theirs crimes. I cant wait till she comes face to face with the man who spermed her and I hope she destroys him, slowly and painfully. He treated her like dirt, he mutilated all his children he spawned and it really too bad they all cant take out their last revenge on him cause that would be poetic justic.

I love this story, but I was wondering when you would have some of the free reading available as I cant afford priviledge.

so happy you got to go premium.. your story deserves it... however I only get 3 fast passes a day.. i am reading 3 different books.. so as all three books are in my library, I will give them each a vote.. I love each of these stories so to keep up I am going to read one at a time, which is good because there will be a lot to read and I wont have to wait... or maybe I can switch up monthly.. I wish I could afford to buy many fast passes but that cant happen now.. I wish you all would all go hard copy then I could just buy the book.. Anyway great writing.

So the prince is actually trying to capture Charm or are they talking about the king. or maybe the deceiver is Johanne... I'm thinking the king himself is magical how else would he be able to enter her dreams

wow that awesome that your going to be published.. maybe if it makes Amazon I can buy it and download it to my kindle... what's the book called so I know what to look for........ as for this story write when you can.. I get migraines as well but I always have my excedrin migraine meds to help me.. I really want that king to be taken out.... anyway you take care

l read a lot of stories about witches but this one is different.. This one is unique and I like it... the good thing about fantasy is that anything can happen and in you story everything has.. you have witches who prefer to be called deities, giant spiders who multiply, talking animals which I love, an evil king who needs to expire and you have a good imagination.. keep up the good work