Valadonchik

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I like the story, but the remnants of the Chinese original prevent me from immersing myself in the story. Please edit better.

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Стимуляция огонь!

a very strong, impersonal protagonist becomes even stronger. minor characters are surprised by his strength. end. You don't have to read it.

I read up to chapter 59. the world is well described. but the main character sucks, the split personality is infuriating. For those who don’t like the main character’s drama from the first chapters, don’t read further. at the time of chapter 58 there are no improvements. ehh. unpleasant aftertaste

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Спасибо

Bijūdama?

The idea is not bad. but poorly executed. It looks very much like a draft......................................................................................................................................................................................