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Aoalbjorn

Aoalbjorn

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A novice writer who's pushing his luck!

2018-11-12 JoinedIceland
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  • Aoalbjorn
    Aoalbjorn2mth
    Replied to DaoistPotatoFarmer

    The starting point of MC is earlier than wulin. i m not calculating the strentgh im talking about the potential.i cant read the full novel when i dont see any potential.

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    Book&Literature · Yozuka
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  • Aoalbjorn
    Aoalbjorn2mth
    Replied to Arckane

    I dont mean immigrants that come illegally. I'm talking about countries that bans immigrant being racists.Like how trump banned certain countries. apparently the orange dude is milking his country with The WALL.

    Ch 2 Blood Pact
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    The Rise Of A Porter
    Fantasy · AkshatArpit
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  • Aoalbjorn
    Aoalbjorn2mth
    Replied to itsmeTuba

    true

    Ch 13 If...
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    Cultivation Chat Group
    Magical Realism · Legend of the Paladin
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  • Aoalbjorn
    Aoalbjorn2mth
    Replied to Aoalbjorn

    Or you could just make him fight with a rich 2nd gen young master from big clans in bigger realms...or areas. just to let him feel challanged. After all rich kids use pills and are nurtured in greenhouses. so its plausable for MC to barely win. I wont mindback sitbacks but he shouldnt loose to some stupid guy. he should lose to someone whos strong only because they are old or rich.

    Ch 9 Another Transfer Student?!
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    The Mage of Primordial Chaos
    Fantasy · Cyclxne
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  • Aoalbjorn
    Aoalbjorn2mth
    Replied to Cyclxne

    If MC can barely keeps up with the ginuses then he doesnt derserve to be MC. An MC should be miles ahead. specially in xianxia or isakai fantasy.

    Ch 9 Another Transfer Student?!
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    The Mage of Primordial Chaos
    Fantasy · Cyclxne
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  • Aoalbjorn
    Aoalbjorn3mth
    Commented

    Author, We readers dont feel like the kids are trustful enough. Since nothing happened between Them> Since Kids never helped him in any way. Its the kids thats getting their asses saved and leaching resources form him. Theres no way some person would be so magnanious. and naive. .. mostly when he was assasin.

    Ch 8 Shadow
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    Red Talon Piercing the Darkness
    Fantasy · JCNord
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  • Aoalbjorn
    Aoalbjorn3mth
    Commented

    no problem making friends> Previous life killer, Previous life betrayed person.

    Ch 7 Second Star Student
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    Red Talon Piercing the Darkness
    Fantasy · JCNord
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  • Aoalbjorn
    Aoalbjorn3mth
    Commented

    was he really assassin? asking for favor? and the kid? saying that weather or not he could trust them or not. this is not realistic.

    Ch 7 Second Star Student
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    Red Talon Piercing the Darkness
    Fantasy · JCNord
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  • Aoalbjorn
    Aoalbjorn3mth
    Commented

    Saving them is good. I wont mind. Going with them? Okay if you want to go out of the forest. Giving away his loot? hell no. and showing his face after saving the kids? Why show your face? Arent you a assasin. an assasin should Do anyhting that will connect his disguised appearance and undisguised appearance. He couldnt have killed the bandits without disguise. Japanese Beta MC

    Ch 7 Second Star Student
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    Red Talon Piercing the Darkness
    Fantasy · JCNord
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  • Aoalbjorn
    Aoalbjorn3mth
    Commented

    why pull your hood off?

    Ch 6 Li Siblings
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    Red Talon Piercing the Darkness
    Fantasy · JCNord
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  • Aoalbjorn
    Aoalbjorn3mth
    Commented

    okay does he really need to have to be 18 before story starts? why not start it when hes 12

    Ch 1 The Beginning of the End
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    The Dawn of the New World
    Eastern Fantasy · Shinigami8671
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  • Aoalbjorn
    Aoalbjorn3mth
    Commented

    so many chaps in a day

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    The Dawn of the New World
    Eastern Fantasy · Shinigami8671
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  • Aoalbjorn
    Aoalbjorn3mth
    Posted

    Another story where MC let go of the enemy instead of killing.forced plot.Another story where MC let go of the enemy instead of killing.forced plot.Another story where MC let go of the enemy instead of killing.forced plot.Another story where MC let go of the enemy instead of killing.forced plot.Another story where MC let go of the enemy instead of killing.forced plot.

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    Mystical Dominator of the Nine Heavens
    Eastern Fantasy · Ya She Luo
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  • Aoalbjorn
    Aoalbjorn3mth
    Commented

    Umm!. have I read this novel before? i dont mind reading a novel with less than 100 chap with this same settings and plot.

    Ch 1 The Ascetic Road, Past and Present
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    Mystical Dominator of the Nine Heavens
    Eastern Fantasy · Ya She Luo
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  • Aoalbjorn
    Aoalbjorn3mth
    Commented

    this novel seems similiar to another novel. Cant remember which novel it was

    The boy named Xu Yang was no longer the previous Xu Yang from Lin Yuan's Xu family. The original Xu Yang had been beaten up so badly that his soul had dispersed. 
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    Mystical Dominator of the Nine Heavens
    Eastern Fantasy · Ya She Luo
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  • Aoalbjorn
    Aoalbjorn3mth
    Commented

    Fifth (I m one year late)

    Ch 17 Cultivation: First contact
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    Beyond Reality - Atomsk Ascension Over Heavens
    Eastern Fantasy · Meralman
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  • Aoalbjorn
    Aoalbjorn3mth
    Commented

    Divine church is US.

    Ch 11 Unbreakable oath (1/2)
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    Beyond Reality - Atomsk Ascension Over Heavens
    Eastern Fantasy · Meralman
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  • Aoalbjorn
    Aoalbjorn3mth
    Commented

    Does he have money?

    Ch 6 This is really a magical world
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    Beyond Reality - Atomsk Ascension Over Heavens
    Eastern Fantasy · Meralman
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  • Aoalbjorn
    Aoalbjorn3mth
    Posted

    This review is based on synopsis only. Because I feel like i didn't need to read any further. MC was shunned by the clan.? Now instead of getting his relation severed from the clan, he wants to prove his worth to the clan? Just leave the clan that wants to kill him. it's merciful enough that he doesn't kill every elder in the clan. I m tired of dumb MC that sticks to his clan when clan does not only give him benefits but also endanger his life. Now that you you have a cheat get out of the clan and cultivate somewhere in peace for gods sake. If you wanna prove or what not then do that after you became strong. Staying like a stubborn kid in the clan wont make anythign good in reality.

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  • Aoalbjorn
    Aoalbjorn3mth
    Commented

    MC doesnt know any thing. not even a single idea about xianxia and claims he read a lot? wtf.

    Ch 49 Against the Law
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    All-Around System.
    Eastern Fantasy · PeerlessProminence
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