A novice writer who's pushing his luck!
The starting point of MC is earlier than wulin. i m not calculating the strentgh im talking about the potential.i cant read the full novel when i dont see any potential.
Or you could just make him fight with a rich 2nd gen young master from big clans in bigger realms...or areas. just to let him feel challanged. After all rich kids use pills and are nurtured in greenhouses. so its plausable for MC to barely win. I wont mindback sitbacks but he shouldnt loose to some stupid guy. he should lose to someone whos strong only because they are old or rich.
Author, We readers dont feel like the kids are trustful enough. Since nothing happened between Them> Since Kids never helped him in any way. Its the kids thats getting their asses saved and leaching resources form him. Theres no way some person would be so magnanious. and naive. .. mostly when he was assasin.
Saving them is good. I wont mind. Going with them? Okay if you want to go out of the forest. Giving away his loot? hell no. and showing his face after saving the kids? Why show your face? Arent you a assasin. an assasin should Do anyhting that will connect his disguised appearance and undisguised appearance. He couldnt have killed the bandits without disguise. Japanese Beta MC
so many chaps in a day
Another story where MC let go of the enemy instead of killing.forced plot.Another story where MC let go of the enemy instead of killing.forced plot.Another story where MC let go of the enemy instead of killing.forced plot.Another story where MC let go of the enemy instead of killing.forced plot.Another story where MC let go of the enemy instead of killing.forced plot.
this novel seems similiar to another novel. Cant remember which novel it was
This review is based on synopsis only. Because I feel like i didn't need to read any further. MC was shunned by the clan.? Now instead of getting his relation severed from the clan, he wants to prove his worth to the clan? Just leave the clan that wants to kill him. it's merciful enough that he doesn't kill every elder in the clan. I m tired of dumb MC that sticks to his clan when clan does not only give him benefits but also endanger his life. Now that you you have a cheat get out of the clan and cultivate somewhere in peace for gods sake. If you wanna prove or what not then do that after you became strong. Staying like a stubborn kid in the clan wont make anythign good in reality.