McRead

What a waste of chapter, nothing but repetitive ranting

Before writing your next story you should really figure out the differences between pov styles and which knowledge a narrator can and cannot know. It will actually make a better story.

It's weird she is so against his way but doesn't actually do anything about it, which is basically accepting it.

It's called bad plot

You really need to tone down things you repeat, like the scratching head gesture.Nobody (me) likes reading things that are repeated.

How is it any good for Kara walking in her civilian clothes next to a known superhero?Also zero romance in this story but suddenly it's a date with someone he talked once before?

The most boring thing the internet has to offer: reaction contentThat's exactly what's happening in this chapter

I don't see the reason for her being shocked

Isn't the question kinda weak? I mean he should be a martial arts expert

But it is personal since it involves Cassandra