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This is a somewhat slow start to a story and it is somewhat repetitive overtime. I do however love this story. The story isn’t as ”lonely” and selfish as a regular cultivation novels usually are but warmer and more focused on heart than just pure power and progress which is also a welcome change of pace.
The actual writkng ks good but the story is Somewhat nonsensical. Introducing characthers and ”things” that happened in the past without them being relevant to the story. It is not worth to add something which shouldnt be there in the first place. for eXample his ”ghost son”. isnt that just the author being willful, adding whatever