Great work. In need of a few tweaks here and there but the main story keeps the suspense on anyone reading it. Can't wait to read the sequel of this.

It's so different from the time travelling stories I'm used to reading. It's refreshing to find a story that is more realistic. The charactercharacters's plots are all resolved. No lose ends.

Very entertaining.... couldn't keep my eyes off of it. Character's physiche was left a little to the imagination but overall it was a great story.