I am a novel editor and I Perfer Quiet places, The Novels I like the most are the ones that are actually fuckin original. Read my vomit bucket of ideas.
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Hes becoming a snake nosed whopper here.. aint he.
hope it grows up in chakra land than dark souls.
If: time traveler Than: doomed to fail success would mean they cease to exist and thus cant perform the time travel cutting off the loop which is how time travel is said in Harry Potter. itd juat make a new timeline.
harry Potter, Phoenix gamer I think.
I think its, "Harry Potter, the phoenix gamer" or somethin.
Overall good. The main issue is, I think you need someone to read over it and fix the english. That alone could drive people away. but its been a interesting read. Has potential.
Or to delete the big bad later... Like a certain anti-sentience queen.
Well. Atleast you did what Honkai wanted. "Embraced it."
Roast people to death, with rap god style viscious Mockery
And ruins the chance of getting the Blacklight Virus or any of the "op" viruses that are honestly more beneficial when positive.