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cryzsalix

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I just enjoy putting my ideas into stories, seeing my characters come to life is very satisfying, and it's even more satisfying when people enjoy what I write. English is not my native language.

2018-10-29 JoinedMexico
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  • cryzsalix
    cryzsalix12min
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    The author is an expert in watching the world burn. He first sets it on fire (Oleandra going to the dance with Ron) and then washes his hands of it in the comments at the end. You have my respect author.

    Ch 218 Two down, Two to Go
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  • cryzsalix
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    Thanks for the chapter. I'm a little confused by what happened in that last scene, but I guess that was the point. Did a dark elf follow her somehow? That can not be good.

    Ch 217 Professor Moody's Different Side
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  • cryzsalix
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    I don't know how to feel about Oleandra's constant displays of incompetence and carelessness that even seem to have gotten worse over time. On the other hand, I suppose they are all growth experiences, and this dragon is a very bad matchup for this challenge.

    Ch 209 The Sticking a Fork in an Electrical Outlet Challenge
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  • cryzsalix
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    Everything in this chapter made my blood pressure go up. For now I'm going to reserve the negative comments and save my venom for later, and see how everything develops.

    Ch 203 A Double Rock Bottom
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  • cryzsalix
    cryzsalix15h
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    He is not wrong XD

    'I'm the real victim here!' Harry wanted to shout back at her. This girl could be infuriating, sometimes!
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  • cryzsalix
    cryzsalix15h
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    Great, now Voldemort/Ginny knows a way to weaken Oleandra´s magic, there is no way nothing bad would happen. Are we sure Voldemort is not the protagonist here? Because the amount of plot armor he is getting it´s ridiculous.

    Ch 193 Oleandra and the Goblet of Fire
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  • cryzsalix
    cryzsalix16h
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    Trying to defile the female lead Malfoy? That's what I call courting death.

    "…Draco?" Oleandra asked, her face heating up and turning an interesting shade of red as she connected the dots. She hadn't been cursed; that had just been her persecution complex regarding Moody. Rather, Draco had been the target of Moody's ferret Transfiguration spell. And for some reason, the little git had decided to take refuge inside her clothes? Oh, he was so dead!
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  • cryzsalix
    cryzsalix19h
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    I understand the whole butterfly effect thing, but it's still a bitter feeling to realize that Oleandra's presence has done nothing but change the plot for the worse; at least until now. Ginny is essentially dead, there's an extra Voldemort, Petter got away with it without even being exposed. it's starting to be a bit depressing and looking bad for our protagonist, really.

    Ch 149 Enter Professor Snape
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  • cryzsalix
    cryzsalix20h
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    Okay, I kind of understand that this guy has a grudge against Oleandra's past incarnations... that being said, he still seems like a jerk to me.

    "No, no," said the Magus, shaking his head. "It's done already; you'll see when you get back. But before you leave, I'll leave you with some advice, since everything you touch turns to horse dung. In the very near future, you will be forced to make a decision. For the love of everything that is good, please do the OPPOSITE of what your gut tells you to do!"
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    They may be cumbersome, but with so many strange activities, practice with levitation spells and flying lessons, those robes would make me feel more comfortable if I were a girl.

    "Thanks!" Oleandra responded, as she climbed up the silver ladder. Incidentally, Hogwarts robes were so long and cumbersome that girls didn't need to worry about anyone sneaking a peek. Not that Harry would have tried, mind you.
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  • cryzsalix
    cryzsalix21h
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    Wow, this one got to me. Sad, but well written.

    "I could have done it myself!" Oleandra snapped at him angrily. "And I did! I beat him! I— beat him…"
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  • cryzsalix
    cryzsalix21h
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    Great detail that she, being less affected, still includes nightmares and so on, a very human reaction on her part. It's also something that a lot of writers are allergic to or something like that.

    On the subject of Dusk Elves, it had been the first time that Oleandra had taken a sentient being's life. However, seeing as one of them had tortured her, one could excuse her for not feeling too much remorse at the bloodbath she had inadvertently caused. As the days passed, she stopped seeing the Dusk Elves' faces in her nightmares and eventually, her dreams went back to the usual cryptic visions of the Tree of Terror, Yggdrasil. Yay, fun.
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  • cryzsalix
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    It's going to give me something if they don't start to suspect even a little bit of Ginny. The number of alerts and suspicious things around her are piling up at an astonishing rate and no one seems to even bat an eyebrow.

    "So, I guess you didn't want to rain on his parade," Oleandra joked. "All right, fair enough. But that's enough playing around. Since apparently you know how to Apparate, would you kindly get him out of there so we can all go back home?"
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  • cryzsalix
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    I'm conflicted about the Voldemort thing. I mean, it's cool, and original. At the same time, poor Ginny, she didn't deserve it.

    Ch 110 The Winter is Coming of Our Discontent
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  • cryzsalix
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    Not really a big fan of how the protagonist's personality took a 180 degree turn as soon as she met a cute guy. And I don't know how to feel about the whole thing about her having a predestined guy of a past life, which apparently she had somehow forced into their relationship. On the other hand, you made it clear that she is not the same from her past life so I will wait and see how everything develops. I just hope that regarding the first issue, she doesn't practically become a different, very blushing character every time Cedric or his future equivalents come into the picture.

    Ch 107 Don't let your Dreams be Dreams, Just Do It
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    With all the love I can muster author... go to hell. You said so much and nothing at the same time, leaving me with only suspense. To be honest, when it comes to female protagonists I prefer yuri, either that or you have to give me a very well written and developed male partner (which rarely happens, hence why I prefer yuri.) Frustration aside, I love it your novel.

    Ch 49 Visiting Hogsmeade in advance
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  • cryzsalix
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    Thanks for the chapter. Nice prophecy, foreshadowing, omen or whatever, quite macabre.

    Ch 36 The tree of knowledge
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  • cryzsalix
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    That's a pretty random way to back out about adding Mafalda instead of Dracco to the club. I've never been a big fan of the descendant of the Malfoys but I guess we'll have to wait and see.

    Draco saw the Greengrass twins as kindred spirits, who were always inadvertently pulling pranks on his enemies. He had already great respect for Oleandra, since she had won them the Quidditch Cup last year and nearly won them the House Cup. But after her display of magic in Defense Against the Dark Arts, he was also interested in her star magic, which she had promised to teach him when he joined.
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  • cryzsalix
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    Lady of the stars and mistress of constellations are super cool titles, I'm not going to lie. It was also a great detail to involve centaurs, something obvious to those who know about them, but still.

    Ch 20 Oleandra is a kind of a big deal, actually
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    Lady of the stars and mistress of constellations are super cool titles, I'm not going to lie. It was also a great detail to involve centaurs, something obvious to those who know about them, but still.

    Ch 18 Oleandra tries to get away with breaking curfew
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