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I played world of warcraft since 2004.. then finally quit 3 years ago.. I made sure to delete my account to make sure it 5 unrecoverable. you put enough time into a game & decide to quit you'll do the exact same thing! it's completely realistic to me to have it happen. it ain't no plot device lol

this is a machine translation. really good tho

are we just gonna ignore the giant tree & dead monster?? hmmmmm

*Happy krieg noises intensifies*

good intro but a heck of a run on sentence

Why the heck do so many stories use a prophecy format?! it's such lazy writing from the author. this book was already hard to read with the obvious grammar errors, bad spelling, and now prophecy trope.

you literally just said in the previous paragraph comments that the reason he took the question wasn't because of exp but because he took the quest in last life aka he wants revenge & something else I don't remember. anyway, keep it consistent when writing, there's so many plot holes in this book already

okay so here's the thing, why are you putting these details in the comment section? add it into the story. it cheapens the story when you over explain every single thing in your book. just some friendly constructive criticism. also plenty of spelling mistakes or wrong words used.

This book is a good attempt at writing but there are plenty of mistakes that make it hard to understand what is being said. For instance, the pov changes are quite wonky and confusing, characters genders are mixed up, tons of tenses that are misused, and sentence structures that makes no sense. It's an admirable attempt at writing by not a non native English speaker. I know I wouldn't be able to write a coherent story either. Best of luck and keep improving! I'll check back in the future and update as needed.

I checked scribblehub and it has like 70ish chapters posted. I really enjoy this story and thank for you for all the smiles & laughs. When can we expect scribblehub to be updated? thanks & Goodluck with the move!