The title was a bit long but catchy! I love the philosophy at 1st chapter. The way the author write and the word choices are great too! This is a great book to read. I highly recommend it to everyone. Good job Author! 👍👏👏👏

This is a great book to read! I love the synopsis and the first chapter got me hooked and curious about what will happen to Azkiel. The Author has a great writing skill too. I love the pacing of the story and the narration of it. The Author was able to bring the readers to Azkiel's world with just the words alone. Great job Author! Looking forward for the next chapters.

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The title was intriguing and it made me curious about what this story will be. The synopsis catches my attention the same way the title captivates me. The plot was unique. But, editing is needed here and there, for example the proper punctuation and capitalization and the grammar looks fine for me the same as the pacing of the story. Also, the description at the beginning was good but, too much information was given at the very beginning which might be a problem. It's fine to give informations but, it should be lessen, since other information regarding the story can be shown in a different way other than the description/narration. Just like what the other authors/editors/coaches always say "Show don't Tell". But other than that the Author did a good job! Good luck and I'm looking forward for the rest of the chapters and on how will Mia's story unfolds as the story goes.

Wow! I'm done with the first two chapters and this story is unique and intriguing that I am getting immersed as I read further. I love how good this book is written. this is well-written, from the character designs up to the world background. everything is well-thought and well-written. the author did a great job writing this story and this is a must read/recommend!

Amazing story Author! The synopsis was intriguing, the first five chapters are well-written and established the story very well. I love how great the author write the story. The storytelling, the narration, and description are well done and well-written plus the choices of words that it made it easy to read specially for non-English speakers like me. I also love how smooth the pacing of this book. You did a great job in writing this book Author!

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Amazing! I just finished the first few chapters and I can't wait to read the next chapters! I love how short but mysterious and intriguing the synopsis are. I love how unique the plot is and the author also has a great writing style/skill that I am getting immersed in this book plus the lingering mystery feeling left in my mind after reading the first few chapters. You did a great job Author! This is a must read everyone!

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This is a masterpiece! Good job Author! The synopsis got me curious since I'm not that familiar in this genre, and reading this was a great choice. The plot was unique and I love your awesome writing skill. Author did a great job in writing this book, the narration and the choices of words are on point and fits perfectly. The author got an imaginative and creative mind and an excellent skill in putting into words the world of this book and making the readers see it with their imagination. Great job Author! Looking forward for the rest of the chapters.

This is a great book to read! The synopsis was intriguing that it made me curious and then the Prologue adds more oil to my burning curiosity about this story. I love the genre of this book too. I love how the author creates and write the characters and how the author describe the world background of this book. The pace of this book was smoothly written too. I'm excited to read the rest of the chapters. Great job Author!

Woah! Short synopsis but it has a strong impact. The plot was unique and good. The Author made the characters very well and relatable. Good choices of words. This is such a good story, I'm looking forward to read the rest of the chapters and see how this story will unfolds. Great job Author!

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Thank you for your wonderful words. In regards with the following Chapters of this book you may search the title "RAINBOW ROAD" and when you see a book with similar cover as this, then that's my book. The next chapters are published there, but, those chapters are locked so I hope that you understand. Thank you again.

Nice story Author! I'm not into MMORPG games or the similar kind of games, but, as a fan of Fantasy and Sci-fi genres I love this story! I love the concept and the Author definitely got a creative and imaginative mind for the Author to be able to put into words what was the world of this story looks like. The synopsis was on point and it could catch your curiosity as you read it, the way that the author narrates the story was very well written, although a few editing for capitalization and punctuation here and there is needed other than that there nothing more for me to say. Good job Author! I can't wait to read the next chapter.

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Another great book from the Author and this book was unique more than I imagined! It's not a 1st Person POV, not 2nd person POV nor 3rd person POV but READERS POV! The author is really good in narrating the story and with the writing style that the author choose on writing this book, this story is really pulling the readers inside this world as readers gets immersed deeper in the story. Good job Author! This is a another masterpiece from you!

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