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K_H_Sonali

K_H_Sonali

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2018-10-15 JoinedIndia
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  • K_H_Sonali
    K_H_Sonali2yr
    Replied to Sky_Walker_1275

    Thanks dear❤

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    The Twenty First Gem
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  • K_H_Sonali
    K_H_Sonali2yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

    Ch 1 Prologue: Arrival Of Lord Agma
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    The Twenty First Gem
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  • K_H_Sonali
    K_H_Sonali2yr
    Commented

    Awesome! Say no to arrange marriage! But excited to see the male lead😜!

    Ch 1 The marriage contract
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    The Typhoon's Dangerous Wife
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  • K_H_Sonali
    K_H_Sonali2yr
    Replied to tanu_sam

    Thank u tanu

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    Commander Sylvia: Transmigrated As Ex's Queen
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  • K_H_Sonali
    K_H_Sonali2yr
    Posted

    Nice story. the description of the characters is well written. Don't look at those harsh comments and write what is on your mind. All the best.

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    The Typhoon's Dangerous Wife
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  • K_H_Sonali
    K_H_Sonali2yr
    Replied to tanu_sam

    yes

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  • K_H_Sonali
    K_H_Sonali2yr
    Replied to Ayobami_Deborah_9997

    I am busy with many things currently. But for you babe, I will update❤

    Ch 282 Staying Alive Without Heart
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    The Twenty First Gem
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  • K_H_Sonali
    K_H_Sonali2yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

    Ch 290 Greedy Vampiress
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    The Twenty First Gem
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  • K_H_Sonali
    K_H_Sonali2yr
    Posted

    Hi, Author is here with the first review of her book! This is time travel plus historical romance where the MC goes into the past to search for a precious blue stone and learns many new things and becomes the Empress from Commander. The first three chapters of the novel are about the background of the entire novel- Sylvia's breakup with her boyfriend Chris, the story of blue stone, and how her grandfather sends her to the past without telling her his actual motive. The actual book starts from chapter 4 where Sylvia meets the Crown Prince and her hunt for the blue stone begins. I hope you will like this comedy+historical+romance+action+adventure fusion and crazy antics of the female lead to get her love. The setting of the story is based on the tenth century, with fictitious places, names, and culture. It doesn't follow European or Asian culture or setting.

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    Commander Sylvia: Transmigrated As Ex's Queen
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  • K_H_Sonali
    K_H_Sonali2yr
    Replied to yes_6nope

    I agree with u

    "Did oliver get information on what by brother's plan to do?" Lucian asked.
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    Married to the Devil's Son
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  • K_H_Sonali
    K_H_Sonali2yr
    Commented

    Oh my my! Here are so many fault detectors after every para! please read my novel then. I need u guys there! I invite u to correct my mistakes and thrash me like this. How about we create a council of faultfinders and advisors?

    "I am commander Lincoln, please let me escort you back, my lady. It's not safe for you to be here."
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    Married to the Devil's Son
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  • K_H_Sonali
    K_H_Sonali2yr
    Commented

    Why are you all suggesting what she should do? its author's choice to write those words. 😂 Don't pick up faults in everything and at unnecessary places. U will miss the goodness of the story.

    "My lady" a dark manly voice came from behind. Standing up, I turned around. A soldier who seemed to be a higher rank according to his clothes, maybe a general stood there.
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    Married to the Devil's Son
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  • K_H_Sonali
    K_H_Sonali2yr
    Commented

    I liked the book. I am reading it for guidance for my upcoming novels. But as a reader, I only found two problems. This novel should be written from one point of view that is either the first person or the third person. The shifting of narration from one to third is disturbing and maybe breaking the rule of literature or one straight flow of the narration. If it is written in past tense then how did it change to present at the end of the chapter? Why nobody is amending the grammatical errors?

    I open my mouth to fill my lungs with air and my ears get flooded by the pounding sound of my heart. He slowly leans in and presses his lips on mine. The touch is soft and gentle but as soon as our lips touch he pushes me away and takes two long steps back.
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    Married to the Devil's Son
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  • K_H_Sonali
    K_H_Sonali2yr
    Commented

    What I liked about this novel is its good grammar. The writing style of the story is not confusing like other top novels.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1
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    Married to the Devil's Son
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  • K_H_Sonali
    K_H_Sonali2yr
    Commented

    Haha! I didn't expect a fast comment! This sad opening is the basis and soul of this novel. Stay tuned!

    Ch 1 Prologue: Falling Out Of Love
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    Commander Sylvia: Transmigrated As Ex's Queen
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  • K_H_Sonali
    K_H_Sonali2yr
    Posted

    Interesting synopsis and a well-written plot. ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ Nice job dear bloom.👍👍 You are inspiring me to write a novel with such a royal theme and powerful female lead.🤘🤘🤘I will surely read it to get some guidance.

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    Princess Not in Distress
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  • K_H_Sonali
    K_H_Sonali2yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

    Ch 1 Prologue: Arrival Of Lord Agma
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    The Twenty First Gem
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  • K_H_Sonali
    K_H_Sonali2yr
    Replied to DaoistKYg8F7

    Thanks❤

    Ch 256 Self-Proclaimed Demon
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    The Twenty First Gem
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  • K_H_Sonali
    K_H_Sonali2yr
    Replied to Jacob_Bathsheba

    Thank you so much! If you are interested in bl story then my novel has a bl couple too. Keep reading!

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    The Twenty First Gem
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  • K_H_Sonali
    K_H_Sonali3yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

    Ch 1 Prologue: Arrival Of Lord Agma
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    The Twenty First Gem
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