Mushidennis

like the premis. did not go out the single universe or dimension.

A very good would read. little confusing until the end. But all in a very good read.

good read, would have liked more understandable

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I would think he would have an easier time if he developed all the systems in this world.

The story started poorly but turned out very good.

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