WernelMC

I apologize if my comment bothers you, but I can't help feeling somewhat uncomfortable seeing a Hyuga from the main family training outside her compound, without guards (they should react to Naruto) considering she was kidnapped before. So I'll turn my brain off to try and enjoy your work 🤞🤞

They told me "get out!" And well, now I'm in. Hehehe, your synopsis just hooked me like a fly looking for a place to land and clean itself. I mean, I'm not being very kind with my words.

I can tolerate sorcerers, but the demons from the Chainsaw Man universe? Whose power system is based on concepts and contracts, scares me. I think that at any moment...This fanfic will lose its meaning.

My impression of this fanfic... VERY FUNNY, I don't mean that in a context where there's comedy all the time, but rather in terms of its entertainment value and how the author tries not to break the immersion with so many Variables that, with just one wrong move, would throw everything into chaos! Hahahaha, I had my hype moments and I highly recommend this book. Hehehehehe

Yare yare daze

WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON!!!! WHAT THE HELL

Well, I came because of the title. I was expecting an MC focused on making manga, and I can understand giving him a powerful companion like Galacta, but... why does everything feel so scattered? I feel like the author wants to cover several scenarios and can't focus on just one; it leaves me confused and breaks the immersion. I can only say that I like the premise, but I feel that Lack of focus.

Very interesting at first, but The longer it went on, the weaker it felt; the interactions, the reactions, many wasted characters, it's not shown in a way It effectively impacts the world through different perspectives. And well... To say it has great potential is an understatement, but it was never properly harnessed. Until the very end, I never figured out who the king of the elves was, who the king of the dwarves was, or why so many wizards suddenly appeared to fill the trains—they literally spawned. The ending is absolutely baffling. I wanted to see mechs, damn it!!!! I wanted to see the flying fortress, damn it!!!! Aaaaa I wanted to feel the cultural impacts through reading in a well-written way! To get excited about it!!! But nothing! Just a "years have passed," just a "3-month fight"... What the hell is this...

Ha vueltooo!!

Jajajajjaja esto es divertidismo me encanta!!!!