Love the novel, saddly I'm kinda unhappy with the character development, more focused on the companions than other characters. Now, I'm not saying that they should have a love life, since that would be weird, in the end they're still summoned beings and should respond ASAP when needed, but maybe have a bit more interaction with Cain (harem ending wouldn't be strange in this type of novel, nor forced). Would like to see more reactions when Cain is close to dying too, there's 2 chapters where he almost dies and every1 is like: "Cool, should've done this thing before leaving", like wtf? ** Spoilers I'm talking about the time he was almost assasinated by a legendary assasin in a dungeon and no1 seemed to care and there was no special reaction or concern shown Second time is when he entered a dungeon with a Divine dragon lvl 3xx and the dragon summon Laura, was like should've scanned a few more forms so I can evolve before leaving... Both weird reactions to dangerous situations that I feel should've more weight in the story.

will give it a try btw, just commenting on the new-old trend of titling novels, miss the days where you went into something not knowing what to expect, but understand why things got to such a state, after all attention spans aren't the same.

While I do appreciate titles that tell you exactly what to expect like this one, I would have preferred if the title was something like Backyard dungeon, titles with verbs are starting to get boring ngl

0 estus, time to go flawless baby.

We can see that our protagonist isn't that smart in this battle, tbh we could see for a while now. Btw author how many ppl do you think die in that forest while adventuring? From what you told us Dom only told his story to Nina and Eren, but neither knew Wich Cave he was talking about and I'm pretty sure neither would try searching for the cave and launching an investigation on the "crime scene", same can be said for the rookie party, if there wasn't any bodies left I'm pretty sure no1 would give enough *ucks to find a mage who can use investigation spells and use them on that place, as I said hundreds of battles should happen in a forest that seems so close to the town...

wut

Some games introduce a PK system tho (doesn't happen in novels), the system makes it so that when a player kills another players their name changes colour and while they are with this "rebuff" they have a higher chance of dropping items on death and lose more exp, this could be implemented to this novel to get rid of the players killing each other till lvl0. Maybe mix it with a reputation system that when players are affected by the colour change they will be disliked by NPC or only implement an exp penalty if the players get killed on PVE, while doing a time out penalty for PVP + item drops (after dying in PVP players respawn with a temporary stat debuff and they have to stay in the city for 5-10m idk...). Anyway I just think there should be better ways to deal with death penalties. (PS: I also hate the troupe of killing some1 till they reset their accounts) PS: I'm writing this on my cell phone so pardon my English mistakes, commas and other errors, ty.

Hmmmm, sure ppl are killing each other in a different timeline that doesn't exist anymore :/. Btw It's not because it's slow paced, the problem is that it's very generic and I feel like the class would make it less generic normal VRMMO RPG novel... I understand that the game is evolving, but to be honest death penalty is a very basic thing in any game, anything really doesn't even have to be a game, the concept of reward and punishment is well know in anything we do, in this game while there's a reward for killing mobs and doing quests, there's 0 punishment for failure.

It's quite an interesting story, however the game is very generic. I'll admit that it you managed to hold the essence of the novel, with the jokes and other things, but some characteristics of the game just annoy me too much, Ex: No death penalty, if there's one it's close to nothing, not having a punishment for dying is hella annoying ngl, death holds 0 weight in this story unless you butcher some1 like the protagonist did a few times, but then again that's extra work for the person doing the killing... Another thing, the game has been very generic so far, wisih it would change somehow, maybe an epic quest line or something like that, idk we came here to see the class change, but the MC is just doing what every1 else is doing and that kinda sucks, sure he has more information than the others, but nothing new is happening...

Should be noble, right?

does that even make sense tho, how will the golden crow sect fight against the golden crow race after backstabbing the Sacharro Empire, that's like taking 1 step toward and 5 back...

author you shouldn't try to write smart characters... She went very far in her drug trip to teach those conclusions, very, very far.

Chenglei beat him up when loki and elder dayu captured him as well

bruh. another cockroach villain

kinda funny that he still didn't use this on his generals, but sure. And yes, they had time.

no biggie

Pretty sure that if he loses, by the time he finishes the 10year training the novel will have to change it's name to 4 wives

Amazingly good novel, brings back that good feeling that Oracle Path used to give. Interesting story, protagonist kinda annoys me sometimes, but no1 is perfect so...

You sure did, read 200 chapters of your novel should at least give my real opinion instead of just saying that I didn't like the novel :P. Originally I separated my points with paragraphs but webnovel ate them so... Wasn't very constructive since I got heated while writting it, but then again, that happens sometimes...

This plot kinda sucks tho... If the glasses guy is so strong killing Matsuo and Frank would be a breeze for him, so instead of going on a path of revenge he should've just done the deed...