nice write-up development of storyline was on and off but as a reader you need to focus. character design was on point even though it's just reading, you need to imagine how the script is going.

what a sword 🗡️⚔️ sword

The storyline is actually very good with a very good and nice / quality writing. The characters and their appearance also is cool. thank you

One of the best novels I have read so far. Storyline was great though there were some repetitions at times. The characters were okay with a whole lots of mind blowing stuff

So he's always getting treasures upon treasures

So he's always getting treasures upon treasures

Second time reading this piece and it's always amazing. The story lines is on point the developers did well. The characters were also great. The reader just have to follow the storyline so not to get lost or confused with the characters. Job well done 👍👍

poor goblin

hmm sorry Thousand Miles

Hmm

This guy Hmm

The bell is for Ren and they were following him. So there's no way they would realize that it's broken

Thanks

Coming

Thanks