The story itself was a tad lacking but it was wonderfully drawn and it’s characters were designed beautifully if I had just one suggestion to the author and design team it would be to slow the pace just a little bit and let the story take a more fluid motion .

Umm an uzi

This Is definitely an ok story but the characters dont really feel like they are people

Overall i believe the story so far is quite decent and enjoyable to read i wish the chapters were a bit longer since its already requiring coins and fast passes but other than the chapters being kind short i see no issues with the story so far

3rd because why not

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon