Artmiser

Concrete has been around a long time. Rebar reinforced concrete was invented in France in 1850. Quick edit would fix this.

Chose assassin.. wow what an edge lord. Bow user now.. that would have been different.. that eye ability would let you put allot of arrows down range. A mage you could complete spells fast.. No you chose Assassin stealth , ambush, poison ect.

One drink in nine months of pregnancy is not going to cause issues.

Your last chapter had him introduce himself to the guard where he dropped his sword and you re-introduced him to the guard, a second time in the next chapter, as if he didn’t know who he was.

Then they should have left directions.

With that epiphany, you should really go rescue the 12-year-old girl.

You need to change the time a little bit, since no fast travel mode is available as far as I can tell, crossing a few thousand kilometers in a week is a bit much.

Why is he landing in an airport so far from his home? The jet size he’s using can be landed almost anywhere. There’s an airport of some size near almost every city with a population of 500k in the US.

I hope not because this can kill a story faster for me than a large caliber bullet .

How do you think she got here? Pretty sure she has her own blessings .