promise*

Don't overwork yourself. and don't overpromose either. you're doing great! I'm just happy i don't have to go through the mtl myself...

This right here must have been written by an incel, nobody can convince me otherwise 😅 But also, if you actually were concerned about it, the godly system kind of requires people to have remained pure in a sense for their entire life in this universe. This is why characters with more than one partner never reach the same heights in the godly realm. Not that it would matter, but I can guarantee that she is a virgin.

I mistook her birthday. I thought it was in September...So she's 11, and she would be like 145 or so. Especially since she has tall siblings.

Bruh, how short do you think 12 year old girls are? She should be around 150cm tall, so way taller than his 120cm.

could someone confirm how many chapters there are in the raws? I can't copy the title to search for it..

Stop straight up copying text from the wiki.

imagine dropping out of school and yet Apparition is one of the 4 things you know...and Obliviation is another. Like where are the basics?

Wasn't he 2 years younger than Regulus? so he'd be born in 1963. Are you saying that the year is 1988?

What an absolute loser mindset this dude has. Like literally blames the world for his shortcomings. But I have found that this kind of idiotic way of thinking is rather common in Chinese isekai media. It's really just Incel behaviour, and through these stories they write that they changed and "now get mad puss" to say it in a cringe way.

but that goes completely against all logic, surely? If he doesn't learn anything at the academy for the first two years (the two examples you gave are things he learns outside of the academy), then those should be the years he skips. Not the latter, more useful years, when he has more resources to learn from.

I'm just saying you did make Hiruzen out to be as bad or worse than Orochimaru here. At least Orochimaru was honest with his testing. He didn't try to manipulate consent. If I found out that someone had done to me what Hiruzen is trying to, I'd never have even an ounce of faith in them ever again.

But you've specifically shown that he's not progressing while at the academy and won't do so until the third year curriculum. So, staying at the academy for another year is what's wasting a year of progress. Like, what are you talking about?

I haven't read this, and I don't read much on WebNovel. From my own experience, it's hard to make a connected story from AI. it tends to disregard things said a while ago, and it doesn't like to connect different things it says. Are you sure it's not just translate using AI? That will leave you with a similar AI touch but it'll still have a connected story since the base material is meant to be that way.

it's written by an AI?

ohh...now that I've read a bit further I'm afraid this will become a Harem instead of a nice little Ponzukkle pairing..That would drag down the score quite a bit for me personally..I hope it doesn't take that turn.

Yes, but in developing his hatsu, they speak as if he has already wasted his potential. It sounds like you can't just scrap your technique and learn a new one, he's gone. Unless he somehow transitions into becoming a specialist, he's finished.

I really, really, like this, at least so far. Nice bit of character development, good pairing, good combination of being friends with the main cast but not just following them. If it was updated regularly, I'd give it a 5/5 overall score!I hope the author keeps trying to innovate, even though it might take more effort.

Interesting for sure. Though right now we're barely introduced to the system and he hasn't really seen much benefit from it yet, I can see the potential for there to be something here.Keep it up!

I uh..So far I don't even know if you've posted the correct story. 10 chapters in and nothing along the lines of the summary has happened. Personally, I have no interest whatsoever about whatever his circumstances were back on earth, so everything so far has been a complete waste of time.I'll check in again, if I remember to, FAR in the future. Hope by then you've actually gotten to some of the interesting parts.