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Blake321mthCommentedDelicious in Dungeon
Remarks: Boil it, mash it, and stick it in a dungeon.- Blake3210mthCommentedCh 1 The Extraction System Activated
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But would he have had the funds to buy another?
The undead creatures emerged from the portals, ready to do their master's bidding. The two skeleton warriors, the zombie warrior, and the ghoul began to move, their movements slow and uncoordinated at first, but gradually becoming more fluid and purposeful. - Blake3211mthCommented
Wouldn't the zombie be respawning since he was killed? The week or month it takes since the author didn't explain why he changed the time frame.
The undead creatures emerged from the portals, ready to do their master's bidding. The two skeleton warriors, the zombie warrior, and the ghoul began to move, their movements slow and uncoordinated at first, but gradually becoming more fluid and purposeful. - Blake3211mthCommentedCh 281 Chapter 281
- Blake321yrCommentedCh 1 The Extraction System Activated
- Blake321yrCommentedCh 1 The Extraction System Activated
- Blake321yrPosted
Hey just an honest review. I really like this story. I laugh at the main characters antics ever time. The interaction are so different and I like the diversity. I do still feel a Goal or villain need to be introduced to give more direction in the story but I still enjoy it. I am looking forward to more and sincerely hope you will continue writing. đ„ș PS. I know you asked for some feed back like 2 releases before your break. I put it in after since I gave it some thought feel free to read it if you haven't already. đ
- Blake321yrPosted
Hello, Let me just start out with saying I very much enjoy this book. I will admit the slow updates get to me but anything worth while always takes time in my opinion. So more then willing and able to wait. Author please continue this book as it brings me much joy and a look forward to seeing it further along. I know in chapter 170 you left some negative remarks but don't put yourself down. You have a great idea going and I look forward to seeing it grow. I did leave a comment for some ideas if you would like to check back on it. (To lazy to rewrite the whole thing). I can't wait ( really I can take your time lol) for the next chapter. ( ââżâ )âĄ
- Blake321yrCommentedCh 169 Taming Treasure Seeking Mouse
- Blake321yrCommented
I love the story. You have a great concept and I like the storyline. I agree that the collector identity is great. I also love all the misunderstanding. They are so funny. The cons would be the clones. But mostly because I find them overpowering when you had limitations on the system to keep the character balanced. I read the previous chapters before you remade the story so I know you probably don't want to rewrite it just for that. But I would suggest making a discovery of a weakness the clones have l, like possibly a time limit and having to remake them or that they have to be in contact with the original every once and a while. Up to you. I as a reader would also like to see a goal for the mc. We know he is a reincarnation. But we don't know his passed. So we don't know what motivates him. Is he materialistic and wants to collect rare items or pets. Does he want to live forever, or build a supreme sect or maybe find out more about the system? Last suggestion is I would also like a villain or antagonist. But otherwise I enjoy the story some fight scenes would be nice but take it at your own pase. Oh and I agree with No Haren please I wouldn't mind a love interest but honestly not big on it. But I'll still read on no matter what. Keep it up. đ
Ch 169 Taming Treasure Seeking Mouse - Blake321yrCommented
Elf
The rest of the vultures saw their comrade fall in the hands of the human. They were enraged and attacked. - Blake322yrCommentedCh 1 The Extraction System Activated
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- Blake322yrCommentedCh 116 Arrive At The Monkey Town
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Aren't dogs color blind?
His hands were covered with golden-colored fur, and he couldn't even call it his hands anymore. - Blake322yrCommented
10+5+20+50+20=105
"In total, there are 100 marks you can get from this, and you need to get 70 marks to pass." - Blake322yrCommented
YOU only have one attack method!!
"Where did that white cat come from? It's so fast, but luckily, it doesn't have any other attack methods." - Blake322yrCommented
storage bag?
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