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This book is quite good doesn’t give you a dark feeling which is good

The start is great chapter 38 so far however there is to few chapters to judge the content. Keep up the good work

To bad it was dropped even so I enjoyed reading it very much

Cedric is a 4th or third year based on the goblet of fire making him the same year as the twins

It would be good to do a Harry Potter version of this but to start the story very early in the world and show the progression bit by bit then when the charater reaches modern times do a golden list

There are no wolves in the U.K

The updates are slow

I would say that this book is well written however the pace is to fast. You could slow down the pace of training and explain the cost of thing like training equipment and daily expenses how much you looted

This is one of the best novels I’ve read I know you are good at fan fics as I’ve read ring maker but I suggest you write your own story and world rather than fan fics becuase your works are really great

I’m looking thinking did I make a mistake just one chapter have I been spoiled or something