Same idea but started from one piece

I thought you gonna drop it it's been nearly a week from the last chap it mean u should post another 5 chap for remuneration 😂😂

Well the story development is somehow slow but it's ok and the oc level is increasing rapidely while he is small he surpassed the mc i think when mc was 12 he was upper yellow stage while the mc 6 and he already silver i don't object that but the author said that his oc will be as strong as the mc i can't imagine the mc to still in silver for 7 year waiting the mc to reach silver

The updating rate become unstable lately

Stable and good but the power level need to be more clarified but in total good and the most likeable for me about it that the mc not antihero or obsessed with hero he is shaped by his environment but not totally but okay we can say that he is hopefull

Really agood one new prospect new style I am waiting for your next update..... ....... ........... ....... ....... .......... .......................

It's sucks but thnx anyway

Not English 😢

Fanfiction of what?!

Will it really good one i want to see it's end.. ................................................. .................................................

After zoldyck house arc the story become rushed and gojo satoru image started to be dull and just an expert with poker face and some bad joke and the story become from outer domain p.o.v no mc pov chit chat and jumb in events..... It really started very good

Well it's not bad and the story proceeding in a good way but too short u know iam waiting for 4 days

Well i didn't read it yet but the idea attracted me so i will raise it's rate till i see if it's deserved...................................................................

Nice job

Ok I'm sorry for being impatient and misjudge other but it really irritated me

Will u can make him accept edyth and remember what you now and edyth make him accept paula then but i wish not to be overly harem

Thanks bro for the double update

Bro increase your update rate mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooor mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Good integration .......................................................................................t The idea is not bad and the early drama integrated the mc well then come after that the comeback

Thanks for the chapter i pictured the mc like the were wolf in van helsing but in control