SailusGebel
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It wasn't stated in the story yet.
? I simply want people to spend their time on something enjoyable. If someone doesn't enjoy my novel, I won't lie to him and say it would get better you should definitely keep reading and stuff like that.
I know, but more info = telling you one of the main twists of the story. The thing is, I, just like readers who enjoy my work, want to get to the interesting parts of the story. I want to write these twists, to give you the ending that I think will be great. But, I don't have the time to write all day long. I need to write the middle part, sometimes I don't have the inspiration, and so on. This desire is one of the reasons why I'm still writing the story. While some other authors would probably do a rewrite or drop the novel. Cause you know, it isn't doing great in terms of numbers.
I still don't know if there will be a romantic relationship. As for why she did this, it will be too much of a spoiler so I will answer this partially. Here is the spoiler. She did it to protect him(which is somewhat obvious), but how exactly she came to this thought, I can't tell.
I didn't understand what you mean here, sorry. Can you perhaps phrase it differently?
Yes, there will be development. As I use a semi-realistic approach, right now, he isn't weak or anything like that. He is simply inexperienced. He sees many different fighting styles for the first time in his life. There is also the fact that he is overcoming his nervousness as it's a continuous process. I can't tell you in terms of chapters(they aren't written yet), but if you look at it from the point of the novel's time, he will change after half a month.
I can't increase my update schedule as I have work. If I get at least some small amount of money in return, I might brace myself and go all-in on writing, disregarding my free time, but not at the moment. As for description and title name, perhaps, but I don't know how to change them.
The thing is, I do want to earn money and transition into being a full-time author. I understand that my novel is a niche novel, and that's not why I'm sad. It's because I messed up very hard. I killed the novel myself. If only I were better, I wouldn't lose so many readers.