Sweet_Tea

It’s not it’s a flat power system and this is just something the author keeps saying for some reason

Alright I’ll give it a try cus cyberpunk is one of my 2 favourite styles along with steampunk and the characters are very well written I just can’t stand the fluff

I got to chapter 39 and dropped it. A few problems to many that make it a bit to boring for someone like me. 1 it’s written like it’s made by ai which isn’t the main problem but the fact that it contains sooo much waffle between every sentence there are is a sentence the describes the previous or the next one think like “he opened his mouth like it was the first time “I’m hungry” he bellowed like speaking to the heavens”. I get that this is a writing skill used to emphasise certain lines BUT THIS STORY USES IT EVERY DAMN LINE. It get boring and annoying. Second u give the uses one op system that basically makes him the strongest person in the verse maybe if he had to unlock it lvl 1-6 but no he can straight go to lvl 5 without delay with it only damaging his body, making all combat a bit boring. The story is also just a bit boring the two mc so far are actually quite well written but maybe it’s the fighting style but dialogue just annoys me😂 and it took the story in just a really non interesting direction. Honestly most of these problems wouldn’t turn me off the story but the writing style is sooooooo damn annoying it makes it basically unreadable.

Is the author okay?

Wait why is he mad at the larkinsons?

Is it just me or is ves gettting dumber relative to anyone else?

Sooo star designers are acutelly more op than I thought 🤣 nice I thought all the hype stemmed from their brain and resources but no they actually

I thought she grew out of this?

I forgot these guys are giant 🐱

This has probably been the best 5 chapter in the past 1 year