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Bloodmoot1yrReplied to Bloodmootfey*
"Why you confuse? You guessed right the first time. I am a fey witch!"- Bloodmoot1yrCommented
"Why are you confused? You guessed right the first time. I'm a few wizard"**** Maybe it is just me but the Grammer gets way worse when characters trash talk in this novel lol.
"Why you confuse? You guessed right the first time. I am a fey witch!" - Bloodmoot1yrCommented
Didn't he cast this on 100 orcs?
Emery needed a lot of focus to just channel the spell and order one root into moving, and it was even harder for Emery to control both at the same time. The lightning fast speed the little creature exhibited also did not help in his endeavor. - Bloodmoot1yrCommented
beat* not beated
"Hmm… oh? He beated Lodos too? Pretty amazing." The deputy head commented when he saw Lodos getting thrashed. "This boy fights with both wits and tenacity, no wonder the crowd likes him. However, the reason he managed to achieve first place was merely because of those people around him and his fortune." - Bloodmoot1yrCommented
Only 15? That isn't better than before is it?
[Battle power increase by 15] - Bloodmoot1yrCommented
cauterized* is burning a wound closed. Sterilized is killing bacteria, cleaning out dirt etc etc.
The thing Julian did for him really burned his spirit. Thrax slammed the spear into the ground, as he forced himself to stand and cast a tier 1 fire spell [Heat Touch]. As his hand glowed a red light, Thrax proceeded to burn his own shoulder. When his wounds had been sterilized, Thrax lifted his head and shouted in rage. - Bloodmoot1yrCommented
teams***
[Total team of group 7 :121 team] - Bloodmoot1yrCommented
Horrible name is horrible. Bad Emery.
Hearing the agreement from the loud bull, Julian then quickly addes, "Alright then, Earth Magus it is." Turning his head towards Chumo, Emery saw him nodding his head in agreement. - Bloodmoot1yrReplied to Avan
Ah. apologies. there are just some weird word choices. "A few walk beyond the large tree". "a few steps beyond" or "A short walk beyond" would be better. Translation novels do that often where they try to translate and it doesn't work right (few/short, walk/steps). Hence the confusion. There are a few places where you have that awkward wording in your book. Still loving it though!
"Ahh, yes dear. Could you kindly find me a couple of purple leaves from the herb garden? It's just a few walk beyond the large tree behind the hut. The dried ones here won't work for this man." - Bloodmoot1yrCommented
I see the translation is starting to fail.
"Ahh, yes dear. Could you kindly find me a couple of purple leaves from the herb garden? It's just a few walk beyond the large tree behind the hut. The dried ones here won't work for this man." - Bloodmoot1yrCommented
Big beady eyes lol. Such a romantic!
He looked over and saw Klea sitting next to his bed. Her usual spunk seemed non-existent and instead, her big beady eyes reflected the rain hitting his window on the opposite side of her. - Bloodmoot1yrCommented
I know the wording on some paragraphs can get a little awkward but this scene was just a hot mess. It barely made sense. :/
"Lawyer up, douchebag. Hire the best lawyers you can because I'm going to get you everything. Remember every single thing!" - Bloodmoot1yrCommented
"Roar" How terrifying..
The Amethyst Toxic Dragon let out an angry roar at Lu Yu, "Roar!!!!" - Bloodmoot1yrCommented
This must be a small state.
"Today is the most important day in our school's history! Lu Yu, one of our students, has won first place in the entire state!" - Bloodmoot1yrCommented
Bows? Dude uses more than one?
Behind him stood a mage wielding magical weapons, an archer carrying bows on their backs, and a female healer. - Bloodmoot1yrCommented
For how long though?
[ Fire Attack Effect: After releasing fire elemental damage, it will cause 5% damage per second to the enemy. ] - Bloodmoot1yrCommented
Terrible name.
Lu Yu used Split Claw! - Bloodmoot1yrCommented
That's not excessive at all.
Now, just an attack from Lu Yu's could instantly kill them! - Bloodmoot1yrCommented
How convenient.
[ Notification: During the evolution process, you have automatically completed the absorption and fusion of your equipment's attributes into you. Even if you change your equipment in the future, your attributes will not be reduced ]