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Mmath15dCommentedis this for some latin language? "soon she" = "logo ela"? If so then the equivalent is "Her?" as in "Her of all people?"
"The part about saving her? Yes, that's true. Now about her going to face the troll alone... Puff, do you really think she, soon she, would do something like that?" I asked rhetorically, resisting the urge to roll my eyes at this obvious lie.- Mmath1yrCommented
past of pay is paid*
"Alright first things first, I only took you in to repay the favour when you patched me up at the orphanage, and I consider that payed, you're gonna have to stay here for a good 6-8 months before I can let you leave though…" - Mmath1yrCommented
*truly
I was woken by an truely heinous amount of pain radiating from my shoulder as I tried to sit up and take in my surroundings…key word there was tried as my body refused to move.. - Mmath1yrCommented
the body condom thing includes the mouth as well? Not sure how that would work
He kissed her on her stomach and made his way upwards to her chest, then her shoulders, her neck, her ears, cheeks, and finally, a deep kiss on her mouth. - Mmath1yrReplied to Dissapointed_One
Funny enough, they may do just that if they need to amputate above the knee.
In those 5 seconds, all of my senses came back to me, the cold, hard ground below me, the color of murky green walls being the only thing I could see in those 5 seconds, the sound of a TV blasting my hears, the smell of beer, rotten food, and dirty clothes filling nose, and the taste of blood inside my mouth. - Mmath1yrCommented
I've seen this a couple of times by now, but "rouge"=red, you meant "rogue".
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"overlooked" = not realized "oversaw" = was responsible for, like "I oversaw the project"
An essential factor that Sakura oversaw was that while Yuna used a huge sword to fight Itachi, Itachi was only using two kunai. That means, that Yuna could keep up with Itachi, despite using a significantly slower weapon than him, so she was either even faster than him, or her skill was superior. As far as Chiyo could judge, it was the second case. - Mmath1yrCommented
Not sure if he was ever confirmed as a jew, some concentration camps also had others such as gypsies and such and MARVEL would rather leave it ambiguous than antagonize large groups of people by making a "villain" 100% jew.
"I have lived a troubled life and felt the true cruelty of mankind, not only as a mutant but also as a Jew as well. When I was only a child, I was forced to watch as my people suffered under the horrors inflicted by the Nazis. I was filled with hatred and anger, mainly toward a certain Nazi scientist named Sebastian Shaw. Shaw murdered my mother before my very eyes and forced me to experience horrendous tortures." Magneto explains. - Mmath1yrCommented
Remembered that joke about deaf people and "ear" not having "h"
In those 5 seconds, all of my senses came back to me, the cold, hard ground below me, the color of murky green walls being the only thing I could see in those 5 seconds, the sound of a TV blasting my hears, the smell of beer, rotten food, and dirty clothes filling nose, and the taste of blood inside my mouth. - Mmath1yrCommented
whose is meant to be used in questions of ownership, like "whose car is this", in here it should be "who is"
I can see the worry on everyone's faces, they are worried, about whose going to win this war. - Mmath1yrPosted
The writing needs some serious hep, lots of "there" when it should be "they're" our "their" and some other mistakes like "sended" and some phrases that end in the middle oly to continue in the next paragraph. The story is pretty good , the world is pretty well writen so far and the development of the characters is good but the quality of the english is kind of low, if a proofread isn't possible try using grammarly or something.
- Mmath1yrCommented
It was correct in some chapters, but the word is "lady"
We reached there castle and meet with Morton's wife who is very happy to see her husband but not very welcoming to others . We eat the bread and salt and the guest right completed and we're welcomed inside. ledy Waynwood and Morton held a feast in the in my name in the night . - Mmath1yrCommented
Also send is a verb with different form of past tense and that is "sent", "sended" is sometimes used but in informal cases and technically wrong.
Traveling in the road could not make me bored because of my new brilliant ascorts . Ser Alan Winters have not only one but six squires now . He had two at first but he had them knighted in Harranhall for defeating other opponents . And sended them to their house , And now he took six of them ? But what I observed that this young squires have enough strength to best even the veteran knights . And in pure sword fight my son could not defeat three of them . And that is truly impressive how much better he could traine his subordinates. - Mmath2yrReplied to Alibi_Lullaby
you really don't want to, but spoiler alert . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .remember the teacher that voldy kills in front of Snape during a dinner at malfoys? The one tha said wizards should reproduce with muggles?
"A Biography of Mendel: The Father of Genetics," Bubarge said with interest, "It has inspired me a lot ..."detailHarry Potter: A Certain Ancient Rune Professor of Hogwarts (TL)Book&Literature · Crazy_DarkSide_Cat - Mmath2yrCommented
seriously, I've seen this before but "casted" is not a thing, the past of "cast" is "cast"
Seeing me first tensing up suddenly, then looking at the direction of the voice, and casting the silencing on both of us, Dora quickly casted a disillusionment charm on both of us without me needing to say anything. See? She's total Auror material. - Mmath2yrCommented
*threw Not every verb in past form ends with "ed", not really angry just a coment because this is like the fourth time I see this kind of mistake.
He made one big hole to bury them all in. Walking to Akira, Kentaro carried Akira and throwed him in the hole. - Mmath2yrCommented
*threw
At this moment, Daichi throwed two kunai's in Akira's eyes. Such precision! - Mmath2yrCommented
*stuck
Directing his Chakra to his feet, Kentaro placed his right foot on the tree, it was as if he was sticked. Doing the same with his left foot, Kentaro began walking on the tree. - Mmath2yrCommented
unconscious*
When he took Hinata from Konoha three years ago, he forgot to ask them for their traditional techniques. Not that they would give it to him. Hiashi was unconscientious and the elders would never agree to give their enemies a way to find their weaknesses.