Way back at the beginning she predicted gorge would find a women my guess is its her

It's a good story, but way too many repeat chapters that have been edited. Giant waste of points to read the same chaper 3 times.

Like the book, but the editing on this chapter was bad. I had a hard time knowing what I was reading, but overall, it's a good story so far. Keep it up

it was a great story but I feel like the author got bored halfway through and rushed it. and the "racecar" scenes were the same every time I would have preferred you just skipped it that. take a half a chapter but still overall a good story

Go to chapter 63

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

My first thought was capsule Corp from dragon ball z

like maybe..the scheming system?

almost everything after this point is an exact replica of the scheming system novel it's got way more chapters. if you want to know what happens go check it out

the story called Immortal hero it's copying this book from chapter 90 almost word-for-word somebody should see if the author is aware of it

eventually he just starts copying another book The ultimate scheming system he needs an ampersand at our trial goes to meet the demons absorbs lightning it's almost word-for-word copy if he really tried and took away all his copied parts and be a good book

I liked this book in the beginning but after the free chapter you might as well read the shameless scheming system cuz it's almost an exact copy starting from the tower trial. made me slightly upset.

This is surprisingly good and if there was a real game like this idea be interested in playing. there are a few word errors but nothing you can't figure out. looking forward to see how this develops.

if you didn't get very far in the story you have no right to say it's a bad story good job author keep it up can't wait to see how the real world system works.