Next chapter in a few hours.

This is nothing but a shameless author review. My writing might be a bit rough in the beginning but it will progress and get better as we move along. overall i believe its a gun concept and im excited to show what i have in store for yall

Anyways I thought it was a good ideas to put the rest of my thoughts. cause I ran out of space. Pardon me if the book feels rushed, has a lot of mistakes and everything. It's nearly 5 am and I need some desperate shuteye. Why write at 5 am. I figured the earlier of a start I can get on the competition the better. so there's no better time than now I suppose. I will try my best on this novel so please bear with me as I navigate this rocky terrain that is creating. To all new Readers I say welcome, hopefully you enjoy your stay, if not. no hard feelings.

oh well

I actually love this. someone actually stronger than the gang on Earth, that's actually quite a feat in and of itself. The gang are gonna end up surpassing him in the end, but that's a title he can say he held for some time. now the question is, WHO IS HE

I don't have enough Chumo. we all know what Emery and Klea can do but not Chumo. I say at least have him have some spotlight.

it's a simple thing.

actually I quite disagree. if Thrax is the one with the spotlight then most are likely to focus on him and in case of a group battle it will allow more trump cards to be used. plus it's not like he used the immortal gate. just pure physical strength

Thrax showing these so called elites what he's made off. he's traded blows at the magic academy. surely this should be easy enough

Light work for Emery and the gang

Really anticipating this next arc Avan. So many questions to answer. so may people to meet. Can't wait

I miss quiet Chumo. But I quite like this group dynamic. On combat I find it hard to beat such a well rounded team on earth. We got Chumo as recon, Thrax and Julian as the main damage dealers, Klea with her AOE attacks behind the boys. And of course Emery is an all-rounder ish. After getting his second core he would be able to heal,kill and assist. He would be a great assassin with blink in the battlefield for now. A tank with his crystal skin( I believe), an expert at retreats with the Space gate and so much more so I think you understand. P.S have my spirit stones sir

Has to be my favourite chapter in the entire story, period. Sure all the action and the romance is good and all, but this deep dive into history and seeing how Avans incorporated the legends and myths and historical elements into the story was very intriguing. Take my power stones sir

Well glad Julian is coming along. and like I said Thrax was being too naive, rage and anger do not win a war, time and strategy does. Consequences of his actions? his allies and subordinates were nailed to a cross. Also I'm still waiting for my emry and Klea date

Emery, Get your finest suit out my guy. Also Thrax won. Was kinda expecting Julian to win

This is a fight I've been waiting to see. Thrax Vs Julian. IM SO HYPED

So he loves the same nation that had his father killed. If anything that's a red flag on his allegiance to the Roman empire. What's stopping them from betraying him too. He's too inclined for glory but he's not looking at the bigger picture. Why should he serve them to the degree where he betrays one of the only people that could help him protect the earth. on a galactic scale. Just why

I pray that someone at least knocks some sense into this scheming little 💩💩💩Julian

THE FOLLOWING CONTEST IS SCHEDULED FOR ONE FALL. MAKING HIS WAY TO THE BATTLEFIELD. HAILING FROM THE GLORIOUS EMPIRE OF ROME. HE IS THE COMMANDER OF 5000 LEGIONS ( correct me if I'm wrong), THE MILITARY PRODIGY, THE PROTÉGÉ OF MARCUS CRASSUS HIMSELF. PLEASE WELCOME JULIAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN KAEEEESSAAAAAAAAAAR. AND HIS OPPONENT. KNOWN AS THE STRONGEST BATTLE MAGE ON EARTH (ATM), THE REBEL KING, THE ARENA EMPEROR, THE FIRE SPEAR. PLEASE WELCOME THHHHRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAXXXXXX( that moment you realise Thrax has no surname so you use his nick name as one)SPAAAAAAARRRRTTTAAAACCUSSSSS.

We get to see Julian Vs Thrax in the next chapter hopefully. But I understand Julian and Thrax's side of the argument but Thrax is being too naive if he thinks he can beat the entire nation of Rome. In the series Spartacus I believe it was Marcus Crassus who killed Spartacus and the rebels.