kinglace

Next chapter in a few hours.

This is nothing but a shameless author review. My writing might be a bit rough in the beginning but it will progress and get better as we move along. overall i believe its a gun concept and im excited to show what i have in store for yall

Anyways I thought it was a good ideas to put the rest of my thoughts. cause I ran out of space. Pardon me if the book feels rushed, has a lot of mistakes and everything. It's nearly 5 am and I need some desperate shuteye. Why write at 5 am. I figured the earlier of a start I can get on the competition the better. so there's no better time than now I suppose. I will try my best on this novel so please bear with me as I navigate this rocky terrain that is creating. To all new Readers I say welcome, hopefully you enjoy your stay, if not. no hard feelings.

oh well

I actually love this. someone actually stronger than the gang on Earth, that's actually quite a feat in and of itself. The gang are gonna end up surpassing him in the end, but that's a title he can say he held for some time. now the question is, WHO IS HE

I don't have enough Chumo. we all know what Emery and Klea can do but not Chumo. I say at least have him have some spotlight.

it's a simple thing.

actually I quite disagree. if Thrax is the one with the spotlight then most are likely to focus on him and in case of a group battle it will allow more trump cards to be used. plus it's not like he used the immortal gate. just pure physical strength

Thrax showing these so called elites what he's made off. he's traded blows at the magic academy. surely this should be easy enough

Light work for Emery and the gang