Check grammar as well pls

Overall storyline is ok but need to improve on grammatical errors. Find it a bit long winded and with too many chapters. However looking forward to more stories from author.

Congrats On the good news

One big happy family

So romantic

This old woman never learn

Such a disgusting grandma

She will make a good actress

Should have more kids

IQ so low for both mother and daughter

Some people just dont know when to stop

Think she is mentally disturb

All well ends well

Serves them right for a bad upbringing

Poor thing. Payback time.

Omg tell Her quick

Poor dad sick and still have to worry

Being kind to the enemy isn’t a smart move

So sweet

Such a romanctic couple