Datguypi

Yeah. I've seen worse in my toilet. Not even a joke. Plus they're all around my house.

I read this not expecting much more than a smut filled story based in MHA, and while it started pretty good, albeit with questionable moral choices from the mc, it went downhill somewhat quickly after. It reads like an AI wrote it without any human editing at all after a point, especially with how repetitive the dialogue gets, like with the CLASS PRESIDENT election. Not delegate, Class President. they go off to celebrate at lunch after Bakugo explodes about baldy not being good enough for the position and talk about his bald head saving them from the reporters like 5 times. Then the whole intruder alarm bit goes on with no real information being shared, no mention of the reporters at all here, and then they're back in the classroom celebrating his election as Class President and Bakugo says Baldy shouldn't be it blah blah. Cue Xray scene to keep in character somewhat, then he compliments Momo's hero costume which he already did earlier and neither acknowledge it. Read it for the r18+ stuff since it's pretty good, but that's it.

I wanted to like this, I really did. But the fact that characters almost constantly repeat information and questions that are already known, and I mean repeat word for word, leads me to unfortunately think it's just pure AI slop without any real thought put into it.

Dude's a coward and decidedly not Australian. We grew up with them, we don't really care unless they get in the way.

This is either an alt account of the original author, or this is stolen. The original author is Jordinio and he created this year's ago. Go read the 100 chapters over there rather than this person's attempt at theft.

By that logic, the "Marvel" movies you are referring to, are in fact "Disney" movies.

Going into this story, I had no idea what to expect. Thankfully, I didn't need to wait long since the first story was amazingly written, was realistic in how it played out and how the characters interacted, and quite frankly ended with a more satisfying conclusion than Kono Oneesan wa Fiction desu!? could have had. (It's ending was absolutely terrible and I recommend you never read it or risk an aneurysm from the sheer waste of space-time it is.) The writing quality is marvelous compared to almost every single other story that I've read on this site and the others of its type, and it also kept its stories quality amazing as well, which is nothing short of a miracle for these sites. The only real downside to these stories is that they aren't more vicious, but that is purely my own personality coming into play. Aside from all that though, I would actually believe that these short stories are in fact fables from some type of Bible, and if they are, then I would very much like to know the organisation so I can join them. Overall, this work deserves a 10/10 for fighting the good fight and giving satisfying conclusions to these disgusting situations.

Honestly, I really wanted this to do good. But after having read 3 whole chapters, I have to give up. The premise, while not wholly unique, is something not seen often (in regards to the stand and not the isekai portion). However, the writing quality and conflicting information we're given are just so little and too much all at once. Show, don't tell. Instead of directly telling us about this rigorous training plan his mother has made for him, have him go through it while having a monologue to pass the time. Don't mention abilities he doesn't have, omit them so the audience can deduce that the character hasn't discovered them yet. Keep it simple, and please don't make unironic cringe sentences or phrases. Hyper rigorous is too cringe, say instead, An extreme training plan for a boy his age, or at least something like it. It pads out the word count while keeping it informative and non cringe inducing. Other than these nitpicks and just you getting someone to read over what you've written, you also apparently need to be more proactive with your story. An MC that isn't acting like an MC, or even living his own life is not well received by anyone.

I don't do studying, I find it to be a huge waste of time for me. I passed all of my exams by listening in class and creating mnemonic aids to simplify everything. For those who don't know: mnemonic noun a system such as a pattern of letters, ideas, or associations which assists in remembering something. "the usual mnemonic for star types is O Be A Fine Girl Kiss Me" adjective aiding or designed to aid the memory.

Personally I am biased to the infamous Thunder Cross Split Attack.