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never heard of this one
penetrated, though perpetrated is funny.
inconvenience ... though the wrong word choice is funny.
can't put up with.....?
the problem with anyone ego wants something for nothing.
could be that DGO made the correction. he usually does.
intact. one word, not two.
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the average height for a woman in the US is 5' 4"
embraced them tighter
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What can I say? writing quality is ok and getting better. I've added corrective comments, and the author reads them. The story development is good, though at times I find myself wishing it would move faster. The characters all have their background and trauma that they're working through. Their back stories provide a way for the author to build the world. Updates are regular so far.
him raise
docked not decked
bogged down
ceased not seized