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Book is so bad. The storybhave good premise but the mc keep making decision that feels like author just make stuff up when they writing that chapter instead of plan ahead. For example release games in days instead of weeks is just pure stupid

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Thanks for the chapter. That was a quick reunion and then break up, makes me hard to feel attached to akashi family when things move too fast like this imo

translation is pure garbage, feel like Ai rather than human

I gotta the author really improved their writing on this fiction compared to the Minato one. The characters feel engaging and fun, the fights also fun and I can feel the Mc impact on the story. oh, but the romance still bad and cringe though, if the romance could improve or just get scrap, the story would be much better.

contradicting your self

what in the world.... the author is seriously downplaying ninja abilities alot , this is too illogical.

Why is this author kept repeating ting stuff from the old chapters? It's really kill the flow of the book when something like this happen.

This is such a painful chapter to read

Such bad writing